Will I click on it
Maybe, it looks like romance story which I'm not into but if it's not entirely romance I would try to read
What's my opinion
It's really hard to guess what's happening from the cover which isn't bad. Seems like mix of romance and some kind of experiments maybe? It's looks interesting in some way. I like the choice for title font.
What can be better
Head proportions aren't correct. It's hard to draw persons which aren't looking straight at us. xD
Use some reference to get a better feel for it. Choice of poses that you choose here are the hardest for me to draw for instance. Perspective is the hardest to learn at least for me.
As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.
No worries I don't take anyone's opinion to greatly, every opinion is great is the best way to notice your mistakes and get better. It's especially hard to notice your own mistakes because you're looking at your drawings all the time while making them.
Thank you so much for your opinion though, I've changed the cover very recently so maybe you didn't see new version of it.
Good luck on your comic journey