Thanks for the neat thread!
Will I click on it - No, I think I'm probably the wrong target audience
What's my opinion - it's a cute chicken, but I'm not sure I get a sense of what the story is about as it doesn't seem at all connected to the title...screams chicken journey, but is it a kung fu chicken or a magic chicken...and how does that relate back to the eternal mist?
What can be better - I can't comment art wise, but see my comment above.
100% honest opinion- see above!