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May 2018

Yeah, rewrites sucks...

I lied to myself saying I wouldn't rewrite some early chapters of AVPOHP, because that would distract me from continuing the story, but the more I re-read, the more I hate how I wrote them.
At least they are short, so only 2k words to rearrange and/or throw on the trash.

Big goddamn mood, but like you said, at lwast they're short. Hopefully it goes well and everything just flows from that point on.

[13:53]

I just realised that I had god lore all wrong for my book outline!! I was wondering why I was hesitating so much, and my gut knew something my mind didn't!! Now I've to rewrite the outline again, but this will help solve my biggest problem about the book. I'm genuinely so excited, and rewriting the outline for the first eight to ten chapters is nothing compared to all the time it's gonna save.

Glad you could figure out what bothered you! God lore is hard to keep track of...

It definitely can be. I think I got two goddesses mixed up because they have two very similar key points, and for some reason, when I talk about one, I really mean the other one. But this is a big breakthrough. Once my brain stops being pudding, I can really get somewhere.

Got my end of semester exams in three weeks, but i want to write but i also want a degree so that i can be a economically and intellectually independent woman some day. My Priorities have never been this conflicted before, but hey thats the thing about growing up right? :sweat:

You have three weeks to get ready for your exams.
That makes 21 days.
You can perhaps dedicate 1h each day to writing, not more than that. It would help with your writing urges and you'd also have enough time to study and prepare and get your degree! :smiley:

Agreed. You gotta give yourself something to relax even while studying. Don't feel bad! You certainly need to spend more time studying but that doesn't mean you need to completely cut yourself off from what you love. Relaxing is part of studying too.

Yesterday was the day of 'eurekas' and breakthroughs. I feel as if I've seen a light at the end of the tunnel, and I managed to really break away at the barriers stopping me. Today, I finished laying down some very important foundations for world building.

The one thing I always worry about, no matter how "good" my writing gets, is my ability to write detail about a place. I want it to be descriptive, and I want the imagery to jump out a people, but at times, I worry it will be overwhelming. Ah well. Thankfully I have an outside set of eyes to look things over for me, if it gets too confusing. (...F-friends. I mean, friends. I don't have a set of eyes in a jar to review my work for me. If only eye jars were so useful.)

Yayy that's great! Glad for you!

Also, as for descriptions, might I advise you to take a look at @Ubby 's An Honorable Wish3? The description of world and places in there are really amazing, it really jumps at you (also the story is awesome, if you're looking for something to read... But yeah, descriptions are the best part).

Awww I really thought for a moment that you had a pair of eyes in a jar looking over your shoulder at your page and saying "yeah mate, this is good, but maybe slow down on the description and gimme some good old action scene, ey?" through telepathy

I read the first episode and I'm very interested in seeing the rest!

"The sky was the kind of deep blue that tried to put the ocean to shame." Well, dang, I'm convinced. And embarrassed, gotta work on my own descriptions...
Really nice suggestion.

3:09 PM

I'm done with drawing for the day. I plan to work on the next chapter of Goddess in Her Dreams so I can post something in the coming week or so. I have yet to stick to a fixed schedule for posting because the story can be quite difficult to write. Not that I don't like it, I mean I really do (and I'm open about how I it's somewhat of my favorite among my other works), but with the diverse lore I'm developing, I just want to make sure everything checks out and I don't have all the scenes outlined. Like I know what's going to happen or what the general story will be, but not the specifics... and that's one of the challenging things there. Not to mention that I feel like the story is a bit of a slow burn. It can get demotivating too, seeing that there is not much progress on the viewership and subs lol q-q

Thanks a lot~ Aah. I'm definitely trying. I just wish I didn't have so much I wanted to do.

The burden of an ambitious and creative mind :wink:

Take it slow, take it easy, your health needs to be your primary focus. Don't overpush yourself, you have all the time in the world to make all these awesome projects of yours!
Here, have another hug :hugging:

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