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Jordan Abbott Comics
18 yo aspiring author and artist constantly trying to improve. Author of Start Again: With Only Ashes Left. Constantly looking for all the criticism that I can get!
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As Long As I'm Alive is returning next week after a several month long Hiatus! 20 chapters, and around 50,000 words worth of content are available right now though, so check it out! Genres are Fantasy and Suspense.
As Long As I'm Alive is returning next week after a several month long Hiatus! 20 chapters, and around 50,000 words worth of content are available right now though, so check it out! It's about a little girl in a fantasy world suddenly beginning to remember things from a past life, and gaining an a…
As Long As I'm Alive is returning next week after a several month long Hiatus! 20 chapters, and around 50,000 words worth of content are available right now though, so check it out!
As Long As I'm Alive is returning next week after a several month long Hiatus! 20 chapters, and around 50,000 words worth of content are available right now though, so check it out! Young Lilith of the Amber noble family is nearly assassinated. As the 8 year old girl teeters on the verge of life a…
Young Lilith of the Amber noble family is nearly assassinated. As the 8 year old girl teeters on the verge of life and death, she begins to remember snippets of a previous life in a completely different world where she also died young. The desperation to survive causes her to gain a "Gift," magical …
Young Lilith of the Amber noble family is nearly assassinated. As the 8 year old girl teeters on the verge of life and death, she begins to remember snippets of a previous life in a completely different world where she also died young. The desperation to survive causes her to gain a "Gift," magical …
I release a new episode of my fantasy suspense novel every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.
LGBT stories as in the story contains LGBT, or the author is just part of the LGBT community? Because I am definitely bi, and both my stories contain some gay elements, but that's far from the focus.
It's 2.5k words. I have chapters that long which just barely scrape below the character limit.
For Start Again: With Only Ashes Left, the word count per chapter is usually anywhere between 4k and 5k, and occasionally gets down to 3k or up to 6k. It started out as a huge nightmare to divide them up in half or into thirds for the longer ones, but I've taken to going into them knowing exactly wh…
I watched an anime once about a noble girl hitting her head, which caused her to remember her previous life, and she realizes that she's living the life of the antagonist in a game she used to play, and said antagonist either dies or gets exiled depending on the game's ending. It was a super interes…
Well it's definitely "readable," but that isn't really the main problem. It's readable, sure, but it's kind of clear I didn't really know what I was doing. I don't really have any major plotholes, but there are definitely things in there that would take the reader out of the story. Characters acti…
My first novel wasn't very successful. Oh well, I wasn't expecting to get famous over night, but I've gotten much less of any sort of response than I was expecting. I started posting it in December, and the novel I've been uploading for less than a week has more subs, more likes, and 13 times the co…
As Long As I'm Alive. A fantasy suspense novel about visions of the future and memories of a past life.
Young Lilith of the Amber noble family is nearly assassinated. As the 8 year old girl teeters on the verge of life and death, she begins to remember snippets of a previous life in a completely different world where she also died young. The desperation to survive causes her to gain a "Gift," magical …
As Long As I'm Alive, a fantasy suspense novel currently updating three days a week!
As Long As I'm Alive Young Lilith of the Amber noble family is nearly assassinated. As the 8 year old girl teeters on the verge of life and death, she begins to remember snippets of a previous life in a completely different world where she also died young. The desperation to survive causes her to …
Episode 3 is now out!
Here's mine if you're still doing this nearly a year later, lol. I appreciate any feedback, no matter how positive or negative it may be! As Long As I'm Alive is about a young noble girl nearly being assassinated, and gaining both memories of a previous life, and visions of the future. In these vi…
So I really want to keep this to 100k words or less, and that’s actually going to be a lot harder than it sounds.
Chapter 2 just released earlier today
Only about 5k words out right now. Come on, tear it apart!
Title: As Long As I'm Alive Genre: Fantasy, Action, Mystery
Uploaded the second chapter of As Long As I'm Alive Young Lilith of the Amber noble family is nearly assassinated. As the 8 year old girl teeters on the verge of life and death, she begins to remember snippets of a previous life in a completely different world where she also died young. The desper…
Posted the first chapter just half an hour ago
Young Lilith of the Amber noble family is nearly assassinated. As the 8 year old girl teeters on the verge of life and death, she begins to remember snippets of a previous life in a completely different world where she also died young. The desperation to survive causes her to gain a "Gift," magical …
The general idea behind her character was that she can get a bit too "attracted" to other people, and always winds up hating herself for it, thinking of herself as disgusting. Looking back on it, I think that I did do a bad job showing off that other side to her right away. Is there anyway you'd swi…
I'm planning on doing a bit of revamping the first bits of my main story that people see so that I can draw in more readers. I've gained 3 subscribers since December, so I'm clearly doing something wrong. So I'm redoing the cover, the thumbnail, and adding an ad banner. I also want to edit the fir…
That's a really nerve wracking question, but sure, go ahead.
Yeah, I've been planning on redoing the cover for a while now, and I know I've needed to make a better thumbnail, but I haven't gotten around to it. I'll add drawing a banner to my to do list as well. As for redundancies in my first chapter, what have I done wrong? I know that's the most important…