Velvero
Velvero
Enslaved To A PC & Drawing Tablet linktr.ee/velverodraws
I cringe at myself daily ;')
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- May 24, '19
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Here's mine! It's sorta a school life and it's like my second comic ever so it might be a little less than sub par, but I'm proud of it!
Woah! Your art is amazing! I love the detail you put into everything! If it's not much trouble, here's mine; [image] [image]
here's mine!
These artists are just so good at what they do, it's inspiring!
ahhh im glad you found the review helpful, I wasn't sure if I gave you much to work with as you seemed pretty well off already!
Hey Blaze, Firstly, thank you so much for going through the time to review my comic! I really appreciate it, anyway, here's what I can say about yours: You had a very strong start to your comic, it was pretty captivating and well done! I don't have much to critique here because of the bang up jo…
I don't have a lot say about this matter but if the generally undesirable people in your story are exorcists; may I suggest, that a word for indecent people could be along the lines of "xor" or "cist"? Sorry if I'm not adding much to the conversation, but I just felt the need to share!
no problemo! im glad you took the time to respond to the review!
Once again, sorry for the wait. So, here are some things I can say upon first glance of your comic. You have a pretty simplistic and consistent art style, it's perfect for "short-gag" type comics imo. However, I'm not sure if your current medium is the best one for tapas... I say this for many rea…
no prob! sorry this took so long! good luck with the comic!
Sorry for the wait! I gotta say your story is very interesting. Daily collisions with girls wouldn't seem like a bad curse to have but Rudra convinced me other wise (lol). I love the clever humor your adding in to your comic, pretty well done. However, despite how good the jokes are, they can …
ahh sorry, dude. im taking a break from these for a while. just gotta finish some of my own stuff up then i'll get back to these!
It seems very interesting RoboYak! I love your character designs and artwork! Everything is very well-drawn and captured my interest straight away! However, I here are a few things I noticed; Your backgrounds and shading are a lot better than the actual build of the characters, yes they have …
Hey GusC, great to hear from you again! I read into your story a little bit earlier while you were reviewing me actually, and here are some things I noticed. You're very strong when it comes to composition and your scenery/crowd shots are amazingly detailed! Contrary to your opinion I think your p…
Hey Phenyl! Whoa, I really liked your series and I'll definitely look into reading it on my own time. For the review though, I read a bit from the start and a bit from the last few pages (you've improved a whole lot congrats!). Your panel composition is VERY good, I really like your character desi…
No problem! Good luck with your series!
Hey Aqua! I just read your comic and I have to say, it definitely has a unique concept! I've never read a story quite like Alpha Alpaca... Anyway right of the bat I have to say your panel composition is very strong, it's very balanced and keeps the reader's attention. You also have a pretty good g…
Before anything, I need to get the following out of the way: - I'm not a professional and have a lot to improve on myself. - I will be throwing in personal opinions, so don't take that stuff too seriously. - I would appreciate some feedback on my comic as well, but there's no need to. - Please tell…
Ooh! I've played Mystic Messenger before, it was really fun! I also looked for similar games and found one called 'The Arcana' It was also pretty great while it lasted, but I didn't like the fact that you had to get coins to unlock the rest of the routes, and that the only way one could get coins wa…
Are cat girls allowed? Her clothing has "a night on the town" kinda vibe so I don't know if this counts as casual? [image] [image]
I actually listen to creepy pastas, I tend to get scared very easily and for some reason I draw better with a small rush of adrenaline
HOLY CRAP I JUST SAW THIS, DFFGSG LOVE IT SO MUCH!! I'm sorry this reply took so long AHHH <3 <3 <3!
honestly same, i love seeing all of em.
Thank you so much for the critique! I can tell you put a lot of time and thought into it, I'm surprised you managed to get that much actually! I feel that almost everything you said was super accurate, I'm feeling super motivated to work on it after reading your feedback!
i dunno man, these look better than mine
Oh! That's a relief! Thanks in advance!
I'm too self conscious to take self-reference photos, to be honest All I take is photos of my hands; [image]
@akemikae see what you mean.. Those are very well-drawn though! @Shanny8 Woah really? I never thought of that...
I've noticed when it comes to drawing hands, people tend to be on two extremes of the spectrum. Would you say you draw hands more round and soft or pointy and boney? Personally I tend to draw them very boney and really like that style of drawing them. Pointy & Boney Soft & Round 0voters Show…
Thank you so much for this opportunity! I don't know if you can formulate a review from the little content I've put out but here it is; Premise: Main protag's kingdom surrenders in a war that has lasted 7 years, he escapes imprisonment with the help of his best friend and try to find a new place t…