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Thats good, it means that your plot is so smart that only a single person was able to correctly figure it out, on the other hand tough, if everybody is able to guess the twist it means that you did something wrong
Here, its just my take on a blind nuzlocke run, please check it out if you like that sort of thing
Its not really a comic "comic", I just called it like that because I tought it was fitting but I wanted to do something new and took an experimetal aproach with the layout mixing the writting style you would find on a novel with some images, it also seems like people are having troubles to distingui…
Yes like you said there are many panels that feel empty or unfinished, the reason is that they are incomplete, I had the self imposed rule of doing one chapter per day meaining that I played the game, scripted the chapter, tought of a few jokes and drew it all on the same day forcing me to priorize …
Yes I also noticed that it was hard to read in the more text heavy panels, I thought I could fix that with a more readable font but your idea of adding extra spaces is actually better, i'll certainly will try it on future chapters, thank you for taking the time read my comic and reviewing it.
Just changed the password, thanks for the advice
Lol, I had you blocked, why would I do that? You´re unblocked now sorry for the troubles
Im not sure if the op is still around but here, the first chapter is complete And here is my twitter https://twitter.com/asaku_05
Weird, the link works just fine, here, just copy the link on your browser "https://tapas.io/series/Mas-Blanco-que-Negro-Pokemon-BW2-nuzlocke"
Hi, I just finished the first chapter of my first comic and I would like some feedback of it, since this is the first time I do something like this I know there is a lot of stuff I can do better, I can think of some already but I also would like to hear the opinion of the more experieced people.
Welcome! hope you enjoy your time here 
Hi Im saku and I started my first comic just a few days ago, its about a blind pokemon nuzlocke run that Im doing and its charm is that I have no idea if what its going to happen, its nothing groundbreaking really but I wanted to share it anyway.
There is not enough pages to get a clear grasp of what the comic is about but asuming is just a random jokes series, like what you would find in a newspapper, it actually looks good, the handwritting is neat and easy to read but I found the brown eyes to be too distracting. Also I would like to take…
If you´re talking about points, don´t bother, only kids use them and even if you manage to amass a good amount you still need to wait two weeks before turning them to real money and deviantart keeps a share of that, just stick with paypal so you get the payment instantly and get to keep most of it
Just trying to get noticed