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I think the blank area inside the panels is huge, it makes your character looks small, and a little hard to see his face (I'm on my phone). Try making it smaller, almost close to the edges of the character to see if it stands out out more I'd also try some dots in another color on it, so it won't …

Nov 17, '19

Recommend me comics with serious writing

OMG... This comic is so weird and funny on it's own way. The art style is just too beautiful and clean. I'm in love with this comic lol Thanks for sharing it!

Nov 17, '19

Recommend me comics with serious writing

Very appealing art style!! The story seems good too, thanks for sharing!

Nov 17, '19

Recommend me comics with serious writing

Ohh I read bastard, pretty good story! I can't seem to find the other two tho, there are 5 comics named Save Me, besides the BTS one I subscribed to Dead Days, crazy how that comic has so many updates and only 11 subs o___O

Nov 17, '19

What's the point of drawing comics if no one reads 'em?.. (Promote Yourself!)

If you like mystery with shitty jokes and cats, this comic is for you:

Nov 15, '19

Need some advice with a page's coloring

You are doing pretty great so far! Besides the mood, I'd change the palette if it's night, so the bright green would look dark blue or purple There is a horror comic I read which changes a lot the coloring to give more horror vibes: (it's in chinese, but this episode shows bright colors as ev…

Nov 14, '19

How do you keep yourself interested in drawing a comic?

I feel this too, I like to write the script instead of drawing them, and most of it is characters talking or doing something random I find funny I try to draw them so they have a more concrete visual and hope people will also find it funny lol Kind of sharing funny stuff in this so serious and b…

Nov 12, '19

I remastered my whole comic - new comic font, fixed dialogue and format, will be THANKFULL for your thoughts

I won't go too deep into your comic, but the things that caught my attention were: - the shadows are too dark - too much saturation like on this example: [image] It's quite hard to look at it and your characters lose focus with so much bright and dark shadows. I would avoid using gradients like …

Nov 10, '19

What would happen if human can construct dimension doors? 🌀

Funny, I was wondering about something similar to this these days! Well, if that happens, almost nobody would have access to this kind of technology lol I mean, if not everyone have money to travel by plane nowadays, dimension doors wouldn't be a good investment for the rich people, since they lov…

Nov 9, '19

Secret Santa this Year!

Events | Challenges

I think I'll join this year as well! And I'm fine with a short story that can be based on one or more of my OCs, it might could work as an extra non cannon story in the future

Oct 27, '19

Revised and improved comic book

Reviews | Feedback

I feel like your comic would fit in a newspaper and maybe instagram?, and I'm not sure why, but your writing reminds me a lot of Tom Gauld comics! (not a critic, it's actually fancy and cool to read, but it can also be hard for readers who likes easy to read stories with more common used words )…

Oct 27, '19

Any comments about my web-comic's art style [Kärumtoo]?

My first comic was made with modified shapes in Illustrator: It's very simple and flat too, but they look clean and I believe appealing

Oct 27, '19

Any comments about my web-comic's art style [Kärumtoo]?

I think you could make use of powerpoint shapes to draw your characters, instead of drawing them by moving your mouse like if it was pen??? (don't know how to explain this, sorry), this will make your characters have a more clean and appealing look I can't remember if you can modify the shapes in …

Oct 22, '19

Does art ever made you feel depressed?

Not actually depressed, but when I started making my webcomic was also the time I started working on my own art style and testing waters. I remember how frustrating and painful it was for not reaching the same skill level as other artists. Also wondering how the heck those who draw bad anatomy and p…

Oct 19, '19

I need you to help me decide

I'd delete them in order to not confuse new readers

Oct 19, '19

What do you do differently now?

Oof, I also had this problem when I switched to iPad, so I'm using default brushes on Procreate. Not sure about clip studio paint, since I've never used it, but I heard on Procreate 5 you will be able to convert .abr easily to .brush and other nice things (I feel like I'm promoting procreate lol. …

Oct 18, '19

What do you do differently now?

I would have tried that lmao, but my drawing tablet is quite large and I use shortcuts pretty much a lot too. That's why I'm use procreate, the gestures and UI made my life so much easier

Oct 18, '19

What do you do differently now?

Not sure if it's only me, but I used to draw sitting in front of a computer for hours until I bought an iPad and started drawing laying down on my bed. My arm hurts, but my butt doesn't so it's fine

Oct 17, '19

Sneak Peek Chapter Idea

I'm always excited when the next update is up, but if I see a sneak peek every wednesday, just to wait until saturday for the full episode, I'd feel annoyed or having a deja vu feeling lol If you want to bring more updates in a week, you can break down each episode in parts so it would be more con…

Oct 16, '19

Advice on deciding which Genre Fits best?

Hmm there are a couple of horror elements, but it's more adventure in most episodes (why there is no Adventure genre there? Maybe they consider fantasy as adventure?) Anyway, for me it could be either comedy + fantasy or just fantasy

Oct 14, '19

Quick question:opening?

I see, but I also think you could add this second part on the first episode, because there are lots of action in there, I felt like I was reading the middle of the comic, instead of the beginning, that's what made me have those questions. I know you wanted to start right in the climax, which is go…

Oct 14, '19

We comment and like, but genre and heart?

I'd say horror and fantasy

Oct 14, '19

Quick question:opening?

Hmm I think the panel after the warning note should be placed veeery below from it, because if I couldn't handle gore and yet see something gore there, even if it's all blurred, I might feel uneasy e__e I believe the art looks good (veery gore too, not sure how it was before tho), but I feel like …

Oct 14, '19

My backgrounds never look right?

Oh I only wanted to change the coloring and add shadows, but I agree with you, since that part would be covered with shadows, there is no need for too much details

Oct 13, '19

My backgrounds never look right?

The tips here are very helpful and I do agree with them, but I also want to point out something that would give you more direction when you start coloring your comic (also sorry for the crappy look, I did them quite quickly): I felt this one was giving too much focus on the bottles, stools, and co…

Jan 11, '19

Drawing your human OC