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Here are some facts: There are characters It's a novel It has LGBTQ+ characters in it
Hi, I think this is really interesting! My only thing would be to find ways to make the dialogue a bit easier to read. When it is in paragraphs back to back it gets clunky. It also makes it harder to the audience to keep reading if they are using a PC/Mobile platform since we read differently wh…
Hi, this is only for novels with 50 subscribers or less.
Hi! Sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you! Things got a bit busy for me! I have mixed feeling about the introduction. I like how we are dropped right in the middle of it, however, without any worldbuilding on the initial read it was a little jarring. This still works, but we could sp…
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Based on just reading the first chapter/pages 1 - 11. It doesn't do that great with setting up the plot, but it is engaging. I am interested in the characters and they each have their own unique voice. I also enjoy the colors and art style as well! The dialogue feels real too.
@Kyanbu First, this is an interesting story, however, for a comic (especially for a webcomic) the first chapter feels too long. While it is okay to have long chapters in comics, it may be better for later in the comic. For reading stories on the web, readers often have a much shorter attention…
@Rowan_Lane The start of this chapter is really interesting and includes nice details. Since this is only the first chapter it is difficult to know if the MC is making smart choices, but please remember. This is your character, who cares (besides you) if he is making smart choices. We don't alway…
Hi, apologises but this is only open for those with less than 50 subscribers. c:
Hi, I know you mentioned that you have other novels with more than 50. So, I just wanted to make sure you want me to still review it or if you changed your mind c:
Hi, based on what I could access it is difficult for me to make a review for this one chapter. Is every book its own chapter? Right now, for me, I am not feeling anything but confusion. Instead of making each chapter its own book keep it together in one big book. I also think this is a book that n…
Hi, can you please provide me more details on things you would like me to focus on?
Hi, apologises but this is only open for those with less than 50 subscribers. c:
Your manga is easy to understand, but with comedy I think we will need to have the punch line hit earlier. This means, make the joke happen quicker especially since it is your first chapter. I also, personally, do not get the joke. The first chapter is the most important to draw readers in. Your a…
The flow is nice for an introduction but leaves me a bit confused about the world and the MC. In this chapter, it is mentioned that the MC joined the military at 18, but since I do not recall how old he is it is difficult for me to know how long he was in the military. Despite this, the flow is st…
Hi friends! I decided that I wanted to be more involved in the Tapas community, and would love to support new writers. So, I will read your first chapter and give you feedback. There are a few rules: List at max three questions you would like me to answer about your first chapter. List things…
If you read my story, it would make me super happy!
Romance is fun!
Hi! Please check out mine: https://tapas.io/series/The-Game-We-Play/info
Hi friends! Here is my novel, please check it out! I hope to reach 10 subscribers soon!
Thank you for sharing! I love the art style of your work. It is very exciting to share my web novel and I agree that having the work pre-written is the best way to go. It is easy to let life bog you down, which makes me scared since I only have one more chapter that was pre-written. But congrats…
Hi! If you are still doing this please check out mine (you can do just one chapter if you want):
Hi! Please check out my novel!
Hi! My story The Game We Play. is about: Princess Margo faces a daunting task: choosing a spouse from three eligible princes. But the decision is far from simple, as political alliances, personal desires, and hidden agendas complicate the game of love. Told from the perspective of Suki, Margo'…
Hello! If you love stories with love triangles, multiple characters, princesses, and LGBTQ+ characters then you should check out my awesome store The Game We Play
I also use it for this too. For example, I had to write a grant for class (the professor wanted us to use AI) and was unsure of where to start so I asked AI to write an example for me and provide a reasoning why it did it.
Super excited for the readership of my current webnovel, The Game We Play! I hope to reach at least ten subscribers soon! If you like romance fantasy with princesses and princes (and LGBTQ+ themes) then please check out my story!
Yeah, it helps with name ideas and just something to talk to about ideas!
I agree that at one point we will need to use it one day. One of my professors discussed the controversy behind AI and told us straight out that we should learn how to use it since eventually it may be a part of daily life :c
I personally think both are fun! I love writing shy characters coming out of their shell and complete jerks who probably need to be knocked down a peg or two. My story allows me to explore all types of fun characters, The Game We Play, have three princes so I get to have the best of all worlds!