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Warrior Tang
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Thanks for taking the time to read my story and give feedback. It was envisioned as a TV miniseries. Another reason for the Scene markers is that I do a lousy job of writing the transitions into the text. I did remove some of them for the same reason you noted. In the future the story will jump ba…
Thanks for the offer. There's no Chili in this story yet...
Don't compare your comic to the others. There are many amazingly good artists and storytellers on this site, and you can't expect to catch up to their level in a week. Learn from them, but don't treat it as a contest. Do your comic for your own enjoyment, and it's a bonus if anyone else likes it. If…
My multiverse was getting so complicated that I had to write things out for my own reference. The lore begins on page 13. Here's one of the more interesting things. After the first rush of transdimensional traffic and trade, an overload of paradoxes caused the most developed dimensions to d…
"Listen." Alex spoke the word forcefully, then breathed a heavy sigh. "All that I do back there is take on a job, kill whatever outlaw they want me to kill, head back to the bar, and have a drink while I learn which of the people I have avoided making friends with was killed by pirates that day. Th…
Of course, after I dressed Dreadli up in all those rich greens, the idea of a limited color palette kinda went out the window. ^^; Consider using the limited palette for backgrounds and allowing the characters a richer variety of colors so that they stand out.
Yeah, it came from Apple. Well, your only recourse there is to bitch at Apple and get ignored by their even worse PR. The giant corps are notorious for not telling you what you did wrong, not allowing you to fix it, and having people in their review staff who will ban you if they lost a debate to …
I brought it up and they told it had been removed on purpose. I got a heartfelt "we don't care" from Tapas. Ouch. Yeah, that'll give someone depression. Is it possible that the knockdown came from Apple or Google? That seems like it might be the case since you're still hosted here.
Speaking as someone whose drawing is so bad that I'm writing my stories as text... you're a better artist than me. And looking at your comic, you're pretty damn good. Nothing to be ashamed of there. It's your depression talking, and it's lying to you. You posted something and get zero interest? …
I may be the wrong person to answer this because nearly all of my best writing is a parody or fanfic of something else, but here's my perspective. A lot of stuff has been done before. Go ahead and do it how you want to do it and make it your own thing. If someone else is doing something very simil…
I mean the stuff hidden away in your hard drive I've lost so many hard drives that all that stuff is lost in time, like tears in rain... A few things are online though. Did you ever watch the TV show Sliders? That's a parody written and abandoned circa 1998. How about Celebrity Deathmatch? A…
I'm a writer looking for volunteers to sketch concept art of some my characters. Here's a link to their descriptions. If you're interested, pick a random number from 0-50 and add five, see which page you land on. The story is way too long to ask any one person to draw it, but if there's a scene …
There was something appealing about the shading in the anime of the late '80s through the mid '90s. A few artists like BlueTheBone and Heartpuff are drawing characters in that style for nostalgia points.
Why don't you mosey on through Westglen and see if it's to your liking. Be aware that it's only one character's background story and the main story won't be going back there, but that means that all the weirdness got stuffed into one episode.
Essentially this: https://badspot.us/O-Comic-Two-Cakes.html
My story doesn't really have God-gods. The dimension traders with their high technology have the godlike powers of time travel, moving things around, and destroying whatever they feel like. There's a small amount of debate over whether one eldritch horror should be called a god or not. Season 2 intr…
M'Tanz quietly growled with disgust at the sight of a human baby. Let's recruit the alien bad guy onto a team of humans. What could go wrong. That's coming up in Season 2.
My titles are only one or a few words long, but even that little is much more appealing than a number. My favorite is "Chasing Ghosts".
Here's a 2-for-1. Queen Efernati feigned outrage. "You dare insinuate that I might poison a guest?" Conrad shrugged. "I would."
Mick – The team manager Full name: Miguel Legato Summary: Mick is a middle-aged man with an interdimensional starship and the legal rights to fill a few slots in the Crash Championship tournament, but no fighters to fill the slots. The story begins as he tries to recruit some fighters to make so…
Mine starts out a little story-heavy, but there is going to be fighting.
"No one escapes the Empire." (context: one of the characters was a prisoner who was rescued by someone from another dimension. Well after she has established a new life for herself, they have found a way to track her down.)