whispwill
Whispwill
tapastic.com/series/Kings-Folly
I am the artist and writer of the webcomic Kings Folly!
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- Oct 9, '17
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You have a pretty nice little comic here. My only advice - figure/anatomy studies. You've got the basics down but everything still feels pretty stiff and ridged. I suggest grabbing a ballpoint pen (( yes, a pen... no erasing )) and doing some 1 to 5 minute studies. No long than 5 minutes. Get th…
You might benefit from some gradients. Your flats are fine, but this is just a nit pick... just that one little thing to help push the art a bit. On your backgrounds/things that aren't as important as your figures, keep lighter and add a gradient. It will help to separate your figures more. Black…
Lol I want to burn all of my old pages all of the time, I guess you just have to come to terms with it xD. If the writing is bad though, you might want to go back and touch up some of the dialogue in the older pages in order to avoid confusing with future pages. Just make it subtle and try to cha…
Went through your comic again and even in the newer pages it's kind of the same problem. This is a flat, 4 panel, comic: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/ac/63/b6/ac63b6a435eab18a4efe7ff309bbecda.jpg Character drawn in similar pose, same, angle, same perspective, same size. While this…
The biggest thing is your contrast... everything is roughly the SAME shade of dark gray with ever so slight hints of light and shadow. I flipped through most of your comic and it's the same trend throughout. It makes your pages difficult to read and understand, which is a shame as I can tell they ar…
I'm going to make time aha
Interesting concept and your art is pretty good, I also don't have any comments on your text/speech bubbles. However you should take more time to consider your paneling. This page for example: https://tapastic.com/episode/506633 Your panels are practically the same size and yet they are not line…
I give you the same advice as @KoreanTacos ; v ;
Right off the bat, your text is way too small and there is too much of it. Keep your speech bubbles short and concise. Create a new speech for every pause that would occur if you were actually speaking it in a conversation. For example, rather than writing "You're right. This is a waste of time. …
I am Whispwill, the creator of Kings Folly here on Tapastic. ( proof I some what know what I'm talking about ahah: https://tapastic.com/series/Kings-Folly ) I both write an illustrate my webcomic in addition to publishing, merchandising, and advertising. Lately I've been getting a lot of requests…
that's kind of my philosophy as well, but some times I feel less motivated when it seems my audience doesn't really care.
haha I'd like to say I'm pretty good at the art thing and my comic is the second most popular fantasy comic on tap... so skill and popularity aren't really a major issue for me. just hard to balance comic and job and school
I just finished up a chapter in my own comic and I'll be starting the next one... today actually but now I'm debating if I want to drop the art quality and maybe produce more pages or keep doing what I'm doing. Feels like less people care about what the comic looks like... so long as they get the c…
I will also be at Otakon this weekend u v u //
The same could be said for my comic as well, I haven't noticed any increase in the number of subs I receive.
Actually, I've decided to stay in the end lol. They told me to reformat my comic and...... I'm not okay with that xD
Same! Especially the country specific pokemon!
Oh I drive to the locations, I don't walk, is what I meant aha. I don't drive and play, that's what I have passengers for. I use to use that technique but I found I get even less done as I have to find my rhythm when working, and the 25 min intervals disrupt that for me. Though your method is prob…
Is anyone else suffering this dilemma? Are there any possible remedies.... Has anyone caught a dragonite yet? Aha my pages normally take 12-20ish hours, and instead of that I'm walking ( coughs, driving ) around to pokestops for poke balls = v =
Awe, thank you. Aha ; v ;
Hey everyone! I'll be at Anime Expo 2016 this next week and I was curious if there are any other creators or readers who will be attending! I'll be in the Exhibitors Hall selling my comic and what not, but if any of you are selling or just roaming around I'd love to say hi! (( It's also my birth…
I feel this on an emotional level lol First page: [image] A recent page: [image]
My comic is reaching it's 100th page pretty soon and I'd like to do something fun for my subscribers but I'm not sure what people would like... So I thought I'd probe the minds of the forums. Im a bit limited in my time so I would prefer ideas that are less labor intensive, but if it's a great id…
Your MC looks like you, was this intentional? If so that's pretty cool.
Fan art works as a pretty nice bribe, at least it works on me... ha hah... I'm easily bought/impressed. But I agree with everyone else, just start talking to them. Most people are pretty nice when you get to know them and if they aren't then you probably don't want to talk with them anyway // And…
Thanks everyone! I'll definitely have to check all of these out 
I'm a creator here but I feel like I'm missing out on some of the awesome content Tapastic has to offer. I have a few on my reading list but it's mainly just my friends aha... so I'd love to discover some new content! I'm big onto fantasy and romance comic, but I'm not opposed to other types! T…
Thanks everyone! ; v ;
If it's indonesia, I'm indonesian.... calls up my grandma lol
That is so .... whaaat.... I can't even.....