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I know this is weird and I’m not from Japan, but I want to make, write, and storyboard my own manga (digital).
I'm new to making manga, and while not exactly that Japan related, I want to make yonkoma (4-Koma) and regular manga, and make it similar to my favorite media and media that l like (or, even am nostalgic to). I like to write about shoujo, but I never wrote about mystery before, though I do want to write about mystery in a cute and wholesome way, and not make it too violent and stuff like that. I not just like classic manga and reading manga that l enjoy (like Karameru manga from corocoro comics by Japanese YouTube animator Karameru, I like the doraemon manga/anime and Chibi Maruko chan manga/anime. I'm also inspired by some of tatsuki fujimoto's manga (look back, and tatsuki fujimoto before chainsaw man: 17 - 21, and 22 - 26), and Animal Crossing New Horizons: Deserted island diary. Basically my favorites vary depending on my interest, and sometimes I don't care whether the manga is good or bad, but I still read it to capture my own interests.

Here's a story I would like to make for myself and I can't guarantee I can share it with everyone here...
My story is about a pink girl fairy (a very good shapeshifter, but not typically that great at turning back to normal is some situations due to her iffy work on her magical abilities) who is neighbors with a girl black fairy (who is nice to her on the outside but is one step ahead of her and wants to be a popular student on the inside. She uses magic). One day they meet a vampire, who is a bit further away to where they live and moves to the home of the fairies. And they try a two in one vampire disguise with their magic, but it's not easy. But they eventually learned that the vampire is nice, and want to befriends with the fairies. So they decided to be friends. Eventually I have many other ideas, some other characters, and some storytelling related to the three main characters. I might a red herring or two in the short one shot story as well.
I want to make manga stories and write down manga stories, I just don't know how to. My main character audience is for tweens and teens, and kid friendly looking, because the moral is more wholesome. Genres are kawaii, some mystery, low fantasy, and shoujo. I want to know how to outline the story and then how to add in the story in the form of a nemu (storyboard/manuscript).

Here are three questions for you below.

1) How do I make and write the outline of a manga story and start storytelling and organizing a "one shot" plan with genres of shoujo and mystery/cute wholesome themes?
2) How can I write down a story for a mystery shoujo story if I don't know what the genre or story looks like?
3) How can I transcribe my manga story, from plot outline into a storyboard/ manuscript?

What do you think about this?

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I think you need to go take a writing course at your local community center because you just asked for a writing course's worth of information.

1) At your level, just focus on writing a complete short story summary with beginning, middle, and end. Make it less than a page long, and focus on just one or two characters. Don't worry about genre so much, just get it so you have a story you think is good.
2) Don't write a genre that you don't read a lot of. If you don't read that genre, you don't understand how it works or why people like it. You'll likely make something generic and insincere based on your outsider's assumptions.
3) Take your summary and expand it into a script. Formatting isn't important - it's just for you - but you do need to have what everyone says and everything that happens in order. After that, you just draw it out like a mini-comic. Mine look like this:

I personally think you're overthinking it.

For plot outline, I essentially throw everything out the window and write whatever comes to mind. Polishing script comes later.

I'd draw just a few sketches of the main characters. Ideally a char design sheet that shows the character from front, side, back, 3/4 view. Char design sheet also has some notes on the character like personality traits, height, weight, etc.(Sometimes I don't even do this).

I have no advice because I do not really write stories :blank:, but for mystery shoujo -- I would recommend Usotoki Rhetoric and Clamp School Detective. While not exactly shoujo, I think CLAMP's xxxHolic may be a good read too -- supernatural cases.

Though, honestly I agree with jwabeasley that it may be better not write a genre you are not too familiar with ( -- it could be a genre you do not fancy to work on at this time). Especially if you are starting to write -- like just write/draw whatever interest you right now.

You don’t have to be from Japan to make manga!
I'm an American making English manga -- and not to brag -- but I make money from it, too.

If you love manga and want to learn how it works, you're already on the right path.

The best way to start

is to study your favorite manga while paying attention to how it’s made.

Instead of just enjoying the story, try re-drawing a page of your favorite manga.
And notice things like:

:white_check_mark: Panels: How do they make moments feel fast or slow? What panel sizes are used for action vs quiet moments?
:white_check_mark: Faces & Poses: Can you tell what a character is feeling without words?
:white_check_mark: Story Flow: What happens at the beginning, middle, and end?

:bulb: Example:

  • Big panels = Slow, emotional moments.
  • Small panels = Fast action or funny scenes.
  • Close-up on faces = Important emotions.

And the more you break things down, the easier it will be to apply them to your own work.

:ear: If you need in-depth tips for analyzing manga:

More Info

(note: you don't have to do every analysis all at once. take it slow and focus on one at a time)

Break Down the Story Structure

Take notes or sketch a simple outline of a chapter to see how it flows.

  • Identify the beginning, middle, and end (of a chapter or the entire story)
  • What is the main conflict or goal driving the story?
  • How does the pacing keep the reader engaged? (Is it fast-paced like action manga or slower like slice-of-life?)
  • Look at how twists and misguidance are used if the story has mystery elements.

Study Panel Layout & Flow

Try re-drawing a page from your favorite manga to understand the panel composition.

  • How do panels guide the reader’s eye?
  • What panel sizes are used for action vs. emotional moments?
  • How do transitions between panels affect pacing? (Quick cuts for fast action, long shots for emotional scenes.)

Analyze Character Expressions & Body Language

Cover the dialogue and see if you can still understand the emotions just from the art.

  • How do facial expressions convey emotion without dialogue?
  • What body language or poses make characters feel more expressive?

Pay Attention to Dialogue & Humor

Try rewriting a scene in your own words to see how dialogue impacts the mood.

  • How do characters talk? Is it natural, exaggerated, or stylized?
  • What makes the dialogue engaging?
  • Does it reveal personality, add humor, or build tension?

  • Look at Themes & Mood

    What is the overall tone? (Lighthearted, dramatic, suspenseful?)
    How does the manga visually reinforce that tone? (Soft shading for cute stories, high contrast for horror.)
    What themes keep appearing throughout the story?

Tip: Compare different manga with similar themes to see how they handle them differently.

For storywriting/outlining,

Most stories follow a simple 3-act structure.

:grinning: Beginning: Introduce the characters and their problem.
:disappointed_relieved: Middle: They try to solve it but face struggles.
:grin: End: The problem is resolved (in a good or bad way).

:bulb: Here’s an example using your story:

  • Beginning: Two fairies meet a vampire and get curious.
  • Middle: They dress up like a vampire but fail. They also think the vampire is mean.
  • End: They realize he’s actually really nice, and they become friends.

Once you have the story structure, then we can tackle the script.

A manga script

is like a play script to help you plan scenes before drawing. It includes:

:pushpin: Panel descriptions: What’s happening in the scene?
:pushpin: Character actions & emotions: How do they move or react?
:pushpin: Dialogue & speech bubbles: What do they say and how?
:pushpin: Sound effects (SFX): Extra details for mood or action

You can use Google Docs, a notebook, anywhere you want to write the script.

:bulb: For example:

Panel 1
(A bus stop. Birds are chirping.)
SFX: chirp chirp
Jeff (smiling and waving): Hello!

Panel 2
Tim (looking like :expressionless: ): Go away.

Panel 3
(Jeff is sad.)

Once your script is ready, then sketch rough thumbnails to plan how the manga will look!

And don’t stress about making every step perfect.

The more you practice, the better you’ll get.