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Feb 2024

Hi Guys i'm planning a webcomic, TL:DR: i want some feedback on my style and if you would read a comic drawn in my style.

A bit of Backstory: In 2020 i was inspired to create my own story "Blue Pearl" and started to learn how to draw.
the basic premise is that Blue is a 17 year school drop out who does nothing with his life because he thinks he has all the time in the world.
He lives in Hamburg Germany (my Hometown) and the story starts when he gains the power to control water (cant explain how because spoilers).
Blue loses everything and gets involved with an underground society or gang filled with people who posess similar powers.
He gets assigned to the Assassination Branch of the Gang and meets the main group.
The Story shows the corruption of Blue, the way he deals with all the Grief in his own Way and how he tries to redeem himself.

Blue early in the Story 2024:

One of my new Cover art Concepts 2023:

My first ever Cover art Concept 2022:

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Definitely art mogs me.

He's a water bender? But the human body is more than about 60% water so... he's OP? Or that doesn't count?

Please, I actually want a review here



i've heard mog before what does it mean lol, and yeah he is a water bender but he needs open access to the liquid so for example he would have to cut you first to get to the water inside you.
I want to do the power a bit different since it's a pretty common ability.

He won't be making water whips like in avatar instead he can freeze boil and then control the ice or steam and move any liquid or compress it like a makeshift waterjet or use it uniquely like moving his own blood when his heart stops and i also wanted to keep the stakes "realistic" so he has to work hard and can't throw around a whole lake or anything... maybe toward the end.

He will be OP in terms of the Story but it won't be any dragonball level stuff or anything i want to keep it more grounded, makes it more believable

Oh, he'll be like the mermaids in H2O: just add water

damn i watched that show as a kid sometimes, didnt know they were op like that