I'll admit, it isn't much in terms of plot (I mean, really, a radioactive banana? That's...quite unique.) yet, but I'll give it a chance. (+1 sub).
Okay then, faults. Because why not.
First off, you might want to polish the speech bubbles. Maybe it's just me, but I think I feel that the text in the speech bubbles is kinda bit...disconcerting. They're kinda detached, you get me?
This second point, I'm pretty sure you've received quite a lot of flak from, but the panels are wayy too separated from each other. This might confuse other readers, who might read it from right to left, instead of the usual left to right. Maybe try to put arrows to show where the panels are going, or maybe follow a vertical format?
And third. I know this is kind of pointless, but how does a box zooming forward suddenly shift to the right and up and slap the guy in the face? I'm not much of a Physics major, but I do know that aerodynamic boxes aren't supposed to fly like that. Maybe make him suffer a nasty bruise on his chest that knocks him flat? I wouldn't know. Your choice.
And then your good parts. After all, a human is the sum of all his/her parts, and same goes for any comic.
For one, congrats on being on Tapas. It takes a lot of courage to get here and claw your way to the top.
I know it's not much of a plot just yet, but it's interesting. Very interesting.
Your coloring is quite detailed, and the shading is definitely on point. It's just the format, that's all
Anyways, hope you use the feedback!
-Helioxiv
BTW, if you want something unlike the traditional YA novels surrounding the market, by all means, go to Background People.
If you (@Hippiemoe or any other reader of this forum) can (optional), can you tell me what to criticize in how I write? If you like it, by all means, drop a sub.
Thanks once again!