Tulmut

Tulmut

My account is Tulmut. No duh, I know. I've been drawing comics since I was little, but only recently moved into the digital format. I'm open to constructive criticsm, so feel free to give me a piece of your mind if you think it will help. I've got 2 comics, one is one off jokes, so I don't update it frequently.
My other one is a story driven comic, that has plenty of jokes. Comedy my favorite things to write. With horror at a close second.

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I'm at 80ish, so I'm approaching that milestone. Extreme congratulations. The art style in your work kind of looks like renaissance Disney. It's very nostalgic. I'll be sure to read some tomorrow. Anyway, here's my action series (although it doesn't appear that way at first) hope you like it.

Back again in the middle of a the next chapter. These are two most recent pages I posted. [image] [image] https://tapas.io/episode/2103710 If you're looking for something to sink your teeth into, my comic is nearly 700 pages in, and has several completed chapters. It's a slow burn, but if you …

[image] Since my comic is about what we pass on to others, and about how we decide to deal with those traits and dangers. Daydreamer by Young the Giant serves pretty well. With lyrics about losing precious time, and about the desire to communicate in spite of ourselves. Particularly it's statem…

Mine's an action comedy, that revolves around the contest between inherited destiny vs, chosen path.

[image] [image] This is the most recent two pages from my comic. I spent along time trying to get the effects on that splash panel right.

This is a story about Inherited destiny vs. chosen path. However, before that it's a story about a guy looking for a way to redefine is his life, after losing his memories. [image] [image] [image]

I only do two pages at a time, and I just finished these two. I'm approaching the end of the 10th chapter, which might not seem like much. But each chapter is 50-75ish pages, so it's a lot of story regardless. [image] [image]

point is, describe, describe, describe

You can illustrate time skips through narrations, or even just page breaks. for instance, break the paragraph at the end of the first scene, and then pick up the next paragraph with a description of the person after time has passed. say they just worked out, and that's what you're skipping. Des…

[image] [image] [image] I posted these pages to give an Idea of what it looks like. Here's the link.

Yeah, I ain't trying to impress shakespeare or anything. I just want to invest my imagination into a canvas, and see it come to life.

I do this, because it's the only way I can really feel like I'm producing something. I'm not overly concerned with avoiding tropes. In fact I play to them somewhat, but I don't use them to decide how my story's going. If it doesn't unfold naturally, then it loses what makes it special.

The wife thing explains his change in demeanor. The other building could have been cropped out the shot, even if it would naturally be there.

[image] Here's a boss battle for my sci-fi, homebrew DND campaign.

[image] Here's my most recent Cover. You did a really great job with weight in yours, particularly that of the fabric. Which is an area I don't think I'm bad in, but could improve in. On the other hand, I spend a lot time practicing composition, since I graduated as a film major.

having the whole picture in one consistent art style, is definitely an improvement. One thing that I think was a strange decision, if not intentional; was that you changed they direction your character was facing. In the original, his face was toward the camera which has a focused or driven energy. …

Too Far from the Tree has themes about inherited destiny versus chosen path.

Of the 9 covers I've created, these four are my favorites. [image] [image] [image] [image]

I really like the way you do faces

Most guys can't really do a good Anime-esc style so, this is legit hella impressive. The fight scenes don't look flat, the characters have unique silhouettes, its' good.

Tension is key. Araki, (if you don't somehow know writes JoJo) uses the visual language of film to communicate Comedic or Dramatic tension as the dialogue goes on. A slow zooms, sudden changes in color, breaks in the 180 degree rule, all can keep the audience visually engages enough to consume yo…

My favorite part is Writing the plot itself. Especially when I'm choreographing a fight scene. I really love the entire process, drawing it, then coloring it. By sheer process of the elimination the only thing I think like the least is typesetting. Simply because by that point, I've finished all the…

bruh, if that ain't it. It wasn't till I started making comics that I realized how often I do this