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Sep 2020

Thanks. The point about the character's names is valid. I will keep that in mind.

About the prologue, I was thinking of extending it, but I decided I will first go forward with the main story. I will show more of it though soon enough.

Again, thank you for the sub.

Gave your comic a read! I like Rabbit Boy! He's spunky and a lot of fun; your comic has a ton of good promise behind it. I'm super sorry people down voted it; people can suck sometimes :cry: I subbed and rated!

Here's mine; Paw Prints. It's about a pair of shape shifter siblings.

I've read all your episodes so far for Paw Prints, and I subscribed, rated, and left a comment too!

First, I love the way you did the first four episodes, that eventual fated meeting in the Impound Lot. That was really well done! I really liked the way you blacked out parts of the last page to keep the suspense until they finally all met.

I feel like the police coming for them so suddenly was a bit abrupt, but I guess it was for the sake of bringing the four together into that RV. I appreciate the way you went for the action-movie vibe with that RV bursting through the fence.

I'm also really curious as to what Shifters are exactly, and more importantly how they're treated in society at large. I'm guessing shifters sometimes get a bad rep, and aren't the most well-treated lot in your story's universe? Is that something you'll explore in future episodes?

It's a pretty good comic so far! Looking forward to your next update!

Hello! I just read your comic (liked, subscribed and rated of course :grin:) I really liked it since action and comedy is my fav genre. The action was superb, great fight scenes and great dynamic poses.

I also love how amazing your art is and how good you are at drawing.(you'll know if you decide to check out my comic that what I am taking about)

The colors were awesome they bring such a vibrant and lively vibe into the comic. I am really looking forward to the next update now.

Here is my comic and I'd really like your feedback on it :slight_smile:

So I've just read all the episodes you have so far for The 5. I also subbed, rated, liked your episodes, and left a comment to show my appreciation :smiley:!

I think your comic is really cute! Like seriously cute! I actually think your artstyle kind of suits the comic too. A super-detailed style like mine wouldn't fit the comic as well as your current artstyle does.

I think that maybe smoothing out the character's lineart can work if you were looking to up the quality of your comic. I noticed that some of your lines looked a little wobbly. You can also try varying the line-weight more to give the characters a little more depth to them, appearance-wise.

You can also try exploring other chibi-styles (only if you wanted to try them though!) You're not constrained to follow the same style just because you started the comic in that style, and you might end up finding a new style that you like more.

Story-wise, I really like the distinct personalities of the five, and I love the way they interact and get along despite their differences. You could maybe stand to have them mention each others names more, just to help the readers understand more easily who each of the characters are. I found myself referring to the first episode to remember some of their names.

I enjoyed your comic, and I look forward to reading more about the 5's antics. Cheers!

Hello
Here is my webcomic, I've been working on this for alomst a year now and would love some feedback to see if there's anything to improve on.
Enjoy!

I'll give yours a look :slight_smile: I'll be back with feedback if you want some. I'm always open to feed myself!

@jcmraz I've just read all the episodes you currently have available. I'm really impressed with the way you set up the lore in your story so far. You did a great job with establishing that the world isn't a safe place, and that humans are confined to pockets of safe areas. You also quite nicely set up the premise that there are people called Runners, and that our protagonist is an impulsive and spontaneous character who is training to be a Runner.

I really like your main character Elliot a lot actually, she is spunky and determined, great qualities to have in a main character. Though you could stand to have Atty mention her name more. Elliot says Atty a lot, and that makes his name memorable, while Atty has mentioned Elliot's name a grand total of once in 45 episodes. The comic has actually mentioned Garrett's name more times than it did Elliot.

Action-wise and story-wise, your comic is great! I love the whole fight with the worm, and you did a great job capturing the play-by-play on the fight. I am very interested in those power gauntlets they use, and hope to see more of them in action soon. I am also intrigued by that ominous glimpse that Elliot got from the message.

I subbed and left a comment on your comic (I think I might have accidentally doubled posted the comment, not sure)! Really looking forward to your next update!

Thank you so much :slight_smile: I hadn't even noticed that about the names! lol I'll make sure to think about that moving forward.

@lauragarcia511 Okay, so I've just read all your episodes so far for Knights of Geomora. I have to say, the whole dynamic of Sara's family is actually very interesting to read about. Your comic kind of reminds me of an awesome episode from The Loud House, one where they introduce the large family of Ronnie Anne Santiago, a latina character in the show. I also appreciate that the animal-based characters are interspersed with the fully human-looking characters, but everyone still treats and talks to each other normally despite the vastly different appearances. It really drives home that mixed family feel, which I adore.

Story-wise, I like that you have an engaging mystery with regards to Sara's late great grandpa, but I can't help but feel like you've maybe focused a little too much on the family dynamic and problems, and not enough on the motivation aspect of the story. You did a good job setting the mystery up, and I'm glad that Sara is getting on with the adventure, but you haven't quite shown WHY Sara cares about the mysterious item they want to find. I understand she's unhappy with the move, and with her arguments with her big brother, but how does that translate to "I want to find this mysterious object my late great grandpa hid in my talking bag"? I hope you address that in a future episode.

Other than that, I really like your story! I subbed and left a comment too, and I hope to read more from you soon!

Thank you! I love getting comments, though I really hate how webtoons gives no notifications for it :unamused:

All of that does get explained, don't you worry!

Here's my webcomic :^D Checked out yours and subbed, it was really nice!

@krinscoop Just read all 3 episodes you have so far for Faemen. I definitely subbed, rated, and even left a comment!

First of all, I love your art style! It's very painterly, but still clear and detailed. I like your color palette, and your lighting is pretty good too!

Story-wise, you seem to have an interesting story planned out. You did a really good job in making me curious about the faemen, the deities, the king, and the angels. I'm looking forward to the dynamics of each of those factions, and also their interaction with all the other factions. You've already revealed that the angels are supposed to kill the deities, and now this firstborn character Kefkel is plotting something and has recruited this angel. It's all very intruiging.

My main gripe is about your main character. He's a troubled character who seems like he can't control his powers, and that makes him very interesting. That makes me want to root for your main character, except I don't know what to call him at all. You haven't named him yet. I look forward to finding out his name in your future updates!

Good luck with your comic! I'm rooting for you!

I have a few comics on here and webtoons, but my main one is Full Moon King (if you're inclined to read FMK: Chibi or Author Adventures I wouldn't mind). I have all of them in a few languages. Here 's the link. Feedback please


I read yours love it liked it hope it helps

Thanks for reading mine! I've read all your episodes so far for Full Moon King too! I subbed to both the Webtoons and the Tapas version, so I'll definitely get notified when you update next. I also left a comment on your Webtoons one.

Art-wise, I like the black and white with a splash of color that you used in many of the pages. It's striking and stark. There's a bit of inconsistency with regards to when you use them though. Some of your flashback pages were in full color, while some were in black and white. You might want to limit the full color to present day and the black and white pages to flashbacks, just so the reader can better understand when a scene is a flashback and when a scene is present day.

Story-wise, it's an interesting start! A prologue for your character's tragic past. You did a good job in making me curious about what this weakness is that your main character's dad was looking for. I'm sure you'll reveal it eventually, of course!

Other than that, you didn't really reveal much about your character, so I dunno what kind of character he'll be or even his name. Is he gonna be a bitter man, an evil man, a depressed man, a righteous man, a coward? Is he out for revenge, for justice? Is he running from his past or looking for answers to it?

Waiting for more!

I did the full color for the first few pages due to it being the start of the book. Most of the chapters will be black and white with splashes of color unless it is an important scene or a new chapter/book. I'm kinda doing it like the reg mangas that start in color and switch to black and white. I'm working on a smooth way to show flashback vs present day (It's a minor kink in the story flow trying hard to fix it in the future).

Silver has quite the past you'll learn. His kind of a mix of those things just depends on the situation he is in. I'm trying to update a min of once a month, but my goal it to work up to once a week. It kinda depends on my artist schedule (she does the drawing and full color. I write and do the splashes of color) and depends on my funds (I pay an editor and my artist).