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Jun 2017

I haven't got anyone to critique my comic yet, so I'd be happy if you would critique my comic here.15 It's a comedy comic without much of a plot so far based around a guy that defies physics or whatever I can think of.

I'm at 74 episodes now, but most of my comics are separate, so just read a couple random ones, particularly some of my more recent comics.

Alright, so I read the first few episodes, then skipped ahead to the most recent ones (starting in like April) with some stops in between on the specials.

Pros:
-All the jokes are actually really unique, something you don't see a lot in gag-a-day comics .3. Some jokes weren't as funny as others, but most of them were able to make me laugh. Especially the more recent ones (Hands was one of my favorite episodes tbh)
-The backgrounds, when they do happen, often look very nice.

Cons:
-The characters themselves are a bit lack-luster, as I generally can't tell when new characters have been introduced (if at all). Though, I guess they don't matter since the strong-point here is the jokes (and it was lightweight addressed in the Diversity episode) it is still something to keep in mind. Even ignoring the character designs, their proportions are a bit off all around. (Really big necks, noodly arms, etc).
-While a majority of the jokes are good, there are a few that fall flat simply because they're confusing. Examples of this would be Expired or This Restaurant

Other:
-The character page seemed random and a little pointless (but hey, maybe it was another Meta joke). If so, disregard this point
-Have you thought about using a different/better font for your comic? A font is just as important as the art, and I would recommend trying to match the aesthetics~

phew hope that was good .3.

Well I guess It wouldn't hurt to try :sweat_smile:
I haven't got a critique before so I'll be happy if you would check out my comic. It's an action, adventure comic. I've just started out so i don't think there is much to comment about the story but anyways here it is :slight_smile:

It's been awhile since I've put myself out there. If you want to you can check out my series. Some strips are from way back in 2015 but my newer stuff for the most part is more fine tuned if that makes sense.

I'm a little nervious but if you don't mind. It's my first comic, i come more from a writing background.

Ahh, do you have a room? > <
I'm writing a fantasy comic that I've started since March...but since it is the first time I do comics I...have a hunch for a fact it's messy in it's pacing and storytelling ;;;;; can I have a second opinion? ;v;

I'd like to be reviewd!
My comic speaks about a youth italian baseball team. It started as a weekly strip, but I felt that they deserve a story so I made the first chapter here: Gang of Atomics1 (52 pages) and started the second chapter here: The Perfect Season (14 pages so far).

:wink:

I would love a review as well!
It's a pretty long form comic and it's in a webtoon format.
It's up to what episodes you'd like to review.

You asked for it. Hope this is going well for you! If you still have slots, take a look at DAWN OF THE DAD2

it's a humorous long-form comic. As for now, you'll find 40 pages up (two chapters, 20 pages each). I've received a lot of feedback on the first chapter, and a little on the second. Do you think there has been considerable improvements in the second one, both in terms of art and story?

Thanks in advance!

Awesome I've been looking for critique ever since I finished chapter 2. My comic is an ongoing story, fantasy/adventure type thing.

Check out "The Chronicler" on Tapas

Destiny Awaits! I remember you from like, back in 2015. your art's really improved!

and alright, ill bite, heres my comic: There was a War2 if youre focusing on the art, skip to chapter 4 bc most other feedbackll be outta date. if youre focusing on story then ¯_(ツ)_/¯

Hey there!

If you're interested here's my longform comic and I'm always curious what others think:
tapastic.com/series/electricity-is-her-element

While your comic hasn't yet hit the meat of the plot yet, it seemed interesting and the jokes were funny -3- and the demon girl was cute, so I subscribed~

Pros:
-The art is really good! .3. The characters are expressive, their designs are unique, and proportion-wise everything's good.
-The pacing is quite nice. Both the main characters were introduced within a few pages, and you can already tell a lot about their personalities. I even think what is part of the main conflict was mentioned? (The Mananangal) Very clever story-telling how it was mentioned by passing background characters.
-The backgrounds! Simply the fact that they are there is pretty impressive for a first comic lol -3- But they're also really good! The shops, the houses, and even the debris is all really well done and doesn't stand out too much.

Cons:
-Sometimes the color (well, "color", its grey-scale lol) bleeds outside of their lines. That's not necessarily a bad thing as it works with the style, but just something I noticed.
-This is kind of a nit-picky thing, but it's about the fight scenes. The action is good, if not a bit simple. BUT the positioning in some of the panels were a bit off. Like how between episode 1.4 and 1.5, Ri attacks and jumps out the way, but is still positioned in the same place by the end of that sequence.

Other:
-I like how the characters sometimes exist partially outside the borders. Especially the monster. It's like it's so big/powerful, that not even the borders can contain him~

It's short, so I don't have a lot to say~ But it's great so far! Keep up the fabulous work .3. I really love your style