I looked through your pages and I have some feedback. I hope it's ok with some constructive things.
Your obviously good at drawing and I think the premise seem interesting. There are a couple of things I think can be improved when you go forward.
Dialogue & speech bubbles: There's a lot of dialogue, I think some of it can be removed. Dialogue in a comic/movie doesn't have to be super realistic, it's better to only keep the parts that are relevant to the story. When there's a lot of dialogue, you can separate the speach bubbles into smaller chunks for better readability.
Backgrounds/perspective: I like that there's a lot of backgrounds in the comic, you can tell where the characters are without being confused (I can be lazy when it comes to backgrounds...). I like the outsdoors panels, but think that the perspective can be improved, especially when the characters are inside (for example at the reception scene). It's nice with a colored comic, but the coloring has white spots in some places, like everything hasn't been filled in.
Good luck with your comic