@thomaspeev
Hey, since you were the last one to review another's work that I saw I went ahead and checked out Heart of Vampire's first chapter (Sorry I am a bit strapped on time, but I definitely found it interesting enough to continue).
I was actually wondering after reading if Vampires in your world are different than the typical Bram's Dracula vampires or other pop fiction works? It seemed like you were saying that Vampires in your series injected the blood of humans as opposed to eating them? Or was this just the process of turning someone into a vampire?
I also liked that the doctor was named Deloitte, reminds me a lot of the public accounting industry giant.
Now is this a military setup where countries are using vampires as WMD's and going to war with each other, or is this the world united against another force?
All in all, a very interesting read.
If anyone wants to check out my series and do a critique as well, here it is!