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She would use a walker. Crutches and canes will unbalance you long term and cause more problems than help.

This indicates brain involvement, but most everything else sounds like peripheral nerve damage. I'm curious how an electrical injury caused non-permanent brain injury... That's the biggest issue I see. Mood changes can just be triggered by stressful events (like a major injury), so it could be that she doesn't actually have any brain damage. If an electrical current passed through her brain... those problems wouldn't just go away with therapy. They could get better, but to be honest, I hardly ever see that happen. Brain injury is HORRIBLE. As a healthcare provider it is a huge ethical dilemma for me whether I tell this to patients or not, because I don't want them to lose hope or think therapy can't help. However, personality, mood, and impulse changes are really, really hard to treat and will almost always affect someone long term. Therapy can help lessen the effects, but a lot of people with brain injuries can't even hold a job (even simple ones can be difficult, because they just can't manage time, money, or responsibilities well). Of course, some brain injuries are minor and might not affect someone long term, but... it's just really scary to me, because I see how it totally changes people's lives. They may "look" normal and everyone around them may be asking "why can't you do this simple thing that literally everyone does", but they just can't.

Speech is not in the same part of the nervous system as the arms and legs.

When writing any nerve damage (whether peripheral or central), consider where the "lesions" are. These are the areas that were hit by electricity during the initial injury.

  1. Central nerve damage includes the brain and spine. It is only minimally recoverable, because brain cells do not regrow, but axons do. Some areas of the brain are "plastic", meaning new axons can adapt to take over lost functions in the brain, but this is not the case in the spinal cord. If the lesion to the spinal cord is minor or incomplete (like if you have nerve compression), it can cause weakness like what you described and become better with physical therapy or surgical correction, but if it is complete, it will cause paralysis or loss of sensation or both in everything below the level of the injury. Some newer therapies focus on regrowing axons below the level of injury to take over motor functions lost by the dead cells, but they have mixed results and are not widespread.
  2. Peripheral nerve damage has significantly better outcomes in general. It will cause that weakness you described, but can improve significantly with physical therapy. It also can cause chronic pain. Peripheral damage refers to nerves outside the spinal cord and brain. So if electricity passed through your arm or foot, for example, you could have peripheral nerve damage to that specific location.

This makes me curious. I have talked about electrical injuries before, but just so we are all on the same page, electricity doesn't follow the pathways of the brain or nerves preferentially. The type of "electricity" that our nerves work by is very different from the type of electricity we use for power. The later is a flow of free electrons down the path of least resistance and the former is caused by the flow of sodium and potassium ions through highly regulated channels in our cell membranes. Very different and not at all related. Not saying you can't have nerve damage from electrical injuries, just saying it's not like your nervous system is receiving a "shock" when electricity passes through it. Electrical injuries are not primarily linked to nerve injuries, it's just that nerves are the tissues that won't recover as easily long term. So, your patient would have muscle, skin, and even bone or organ damage in addition to nerve damage, but these could all be recovered from within a few years. Nerve damage is just the stuff that will last.

Instead, think about the path the electricity followed specifically. It doesn't really matter where, just pick and go with it. I've attached images of the homunculus of the brain (motor and sensory cortex), brain regions by function, major peripheral nerves including the cranial nerves, and the spinal cord dermatomes so you can better determine what symptoms she might have based on where the lesions are.

So, one by one:
1. Grip strength from most severe to least severe: injury to motor cortex of wrist, fingers, and thumb; injury to C7 and C8 spinal cord region; or injury to median and ulnar nerves.
2. Trouble bending over from most severe to least severe: injury to motor cortex of trunk, T1-12 spinal cord regions; or cutaneous branches on abdomen and back.
3. Balance problems again from most severe to least: cerebellum, vestibulocochlear nerve damage, all the above trunk injuries from #2, or leg injuries as described next.
4. Leg weakness: the most medial region of the motor homunculus (I honestly don't see how this could happen without significant brain injury), damage to L1-S2 nerve regions, or a whole host of peripheral nerves I won't list.
5. Speech difficulties: language center of the temporal lobe of the brain, facial cranial nerve, hypoglossal cranial nerve, glossopharyngeal cranial nerve, or trigeminal cranial nerve. Notice all of these injuries are located in the brain or very close to it. These are very high risk zones.
6. Impulse control and mood: frontal lobe of brain

I hope this helps you realize that the patient you described has very diffuse and sporadic nerve damage. I think it could happen, but I think it would be more accurate to focus on a particular area of damage rather than try to catch everything.

Hope this helps!

Wow this info is amazingly helpful! Thank you for writing all this out! And yes to all the security talk, I'm actually writing a character who steals body parts so the security aspect is very helpful.

Gross. Good luck! Taking this info into account, as an added side note to your question about bleeding, if your character is chopping off body parts after death, those new wounds won't bleed.

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Hey authors! I’m back to talk about more medical tropes that bother me, because it’s about the only thing that ever does and I can.

This time I’m giving you three tips for how to write realistic hospital scenes.

  1. Hospitals don’t have a smell. At least we try really hard not to. We use odorless cleaners, lotions, air fresheners, and soaps. I’ve heard some authors describe hospitals as having an antiseptic smell, but even our hand sanitizers don’t have that alcohol smell that commercial brands do and bleach is very rarely used, so the only smells in hospitals come from patients and those are usually horrible. Trying to maintain odorlessness (not even clean smelling, but truly no odor) is intentional as many people are sensitive to smells.

  2. Heart monitors don’t beep continuously with the rhythm of a patient’s heart. Like, they can, but it’s super annoying and the default settings on monitors is silence. Believe it or not, nurses actually try to minimize noise and alarms in the hospital. Sometimes it’s hard to do, but there is almost always someone around to address an alarm and silence it. Every alarm has a purpose and requires nurse attention. In fact, the only thing I hate more than alarms are patients who silence their own alarms. :sweat_smile: Do as I say, not as I do. :joy:

  3. Last, but most importantly, nurses never want to be hit on while at work. Ever. It doesn’t matter how cute the patient is, hitting on a nurse is always inappropriate and so uncomfortable. Does it happen? Yes. Absolutely. So much so that it is extremely triggering for most nurses. I’ve seen a lot of comics out there lately about nurse-patient relationships. I think this can be done alright (like in the comic Nurse’s Station), but most of the time it’s not (like in Heroic, which btw I love, but can’t stand how the propagandist is constantly flirting with his clearly uninterested nurse.) On a related note, nurses don’t hit on patients. I’ve literally never seen or heard of this. There are horror stories of medical professionals sexually assaulting patients, because, hey, it’s 2022, and there are psychos in every profession, but legitimate flirting? Nope. I have taken care of thousands of people and seen just as many boobs and penises, and I’m bisexual (so I’m not particularly picky under normal circumstances) and I have literally never been attracted to a patient nor have I heard any of my colleagues commenting on a patient’s appearance. It is one of my number one pet peeves in media when I see a group of giggling female nurses oogling over the male lead’s abs. No. Nope. No. Gross. That it so unprofessional and just wrong. It is my personal opinion that no one should objectify someone they are authority and stewardship over.

So there you have it! My thoughts on common hospital tropes! :slight_smile:

Do you still review comics or novels for medical accuracy? I have one medical subplot and although not a turning point of the story, it's still kinda relevant for the characters involved. The epidemic is chickenpox and the world is reliant on magic so their medical isn't that advanced. The cure they came up with is chamomile. I'll put the link here, if you no longer do this favor, then please just disregard this comment :slight_smile:

The topic is brought up in this chapter:


The cure is brought up in this chapter:

No need to read most of the in between chapters

Again, if you're still entertaining questions... (I came across this thread since someone bumped it, and I plan on reading everything as I go on, so I don't know yet if you already closed the questions since another person bumped it)

My character has reincarnated in a completely different world with magic and whatnot but has memories of her past life (Earth). My character remembers the reason why she died. The character is also made aware of how she reincarnated in this new world right off the bat so she was able to "process" things and calm herself, being able to remember bits and pieces of her past life (with the help of someone close to her in her past life). But she doesn't remember all of it and some of her "memories" are just things that she thinks happened, but not really. There are memories that she thinks happened, but not really. There are important/significant things that she forgot but is able to remember some insignifacant things from her past life.

Do you think it's possible or understandable that the character is experiencing/feeling this type of "jumbled" memory? Is it reasonable that she forgets her own (past life) mother only after eight years of living a new life? Or is that too short of a span of time to forget what your own mother looks like?

I absolutely am still entertaining questions! I always love to help out authors. 🥰 Give me until tonight and I’ll have a reply to both your questions up.

How many questions do you entertain per person? just curious... :grimacing::grimacing: <--- it's supposed to be an awkward smile....

Goood this is sooo helpful! thanks for this thread!

Do you have any info on Port-wine stain (aka nevus flammeus)?

I have a character who was born with fair skin but developed reddish-purple patches on his skin as he got older. I am not sure if I should label my character as having port-wine stain or just make up a fake condition that is similar to it (my comic is a fantasy).

Sure! This is an easy one.
Nevus Flammeus is a congenital condition, so your character would be born with it. It does not develop as you age, but can become more prominent or expand with age.

However, there are other conditions which can cause red, purple, and brown patches. Where those spots appear, what they look like, how large they are, and what color they are will determine what they are called.

Granuloma annulare is probably the closest thing I can find to portwine stains that occurs in adulthood. They are commonly found on the ankles or hands and are painless, red/purple patches that develop over time, typically in adults.

Other Painless Spots:

Liver spots are common on the arms and abdomen while melasma are found on the face. Both are painless, benign (meaning not life threatening) conditions. Purpura can cause purple-red spots and are common in old age. In younger characters (under 65) it could be an indication of an underlying bleeding disorder. Scleroderma are very small purple-red spots that sometimes look like an exploding starburst. Morphea are light brown, sometimes large spots that can cover the face, neck, and torso. Keloids are purple-red raised scar tissue that can expand from an injury to cover a ton of body surface area. So if your character was cut by a blade or knife he might have keloid formation over those spots, extending into massive purple-red lesions. Spider angioma can be small purple spots which look like spiderwebs.

Everything else which is not infectious related will be itchy or painful.

Annoying/Itchy Chronic Discoloration Lesions:
Nummular eczema causes red, sometimes purple patches on the skin, but are extremely itchy and lesions will move over time. Uritcaria pigmentosa lesions are sometimes brownish red, but this is more commonly found in children and usually clears by adulthood (although it can stick around). Psoriasis causes purple-red elevated plaques of dry skin (often flaky and white) commonly over the knees and elbows, but can happen anywhere (although generally not the face) and are extremely uncomfortable (but is a chronic condition that people just live with and often don't get treated ever).

Let me know if any of these conditions peak your interest and you would like any more information!

For a full description of real-life amnesia please refer to my second post in this thread.

Advise for you specifically: Everything you described sounds like magic, so it can work anyway that you want it to work! :joy: Red-flags for "this is not real-life amnesia, but magic amnesia" are discussed below:

Confusion and missing sporadic memories is common in short-term amnesia related to underlying infections or diseases, but does not occur in long-term memory loss conditions. Typically amnesia will affect the newest memories first and the work backwards chronologically in large chunks rather than sporadic, patchy memory loss.

Confabulation of memories is something everyone does all the time, but it's not really associated with amnesia nor are the confabulations typically implausible. Confabulation typically occurs during high emotion time periods, such as death, weddings, stress, life changes, or really anything "big". Like, you may think that your brother attended your wedding, when he really didn't. Or you may think that your mother was being aggressive and defensive after the death of your father, when she really wasn't. Stuff like that. People with memory loss don't "fill in" the details with full-on hallucinations (like you aren't going to think you had a brother that you never had).

Typically significant things are what we remember the most. Insignificant details are often lost, because they are not associated with strong emotions. People nearly always remember their family members, but will probably forget who the president was when they were 12 or the layout of their house when they were 20.

Nope, unless it's magic! So it's honestly whatever you want.

Forgetting visual memories is much easier than categorical memories. Absolutely she might not remember the details of her mother's face, but she will probably remember her name and what her personality was like and what she did for work. She also would probably recognize her mother if she ever saw her again. Recognition sticks around for a VERY long time.

Conclusion: A lot of this sounds like magical amnesia, which is A-ok, because it was caused by her dying and being reincarnated. That bothers me WAY less than magical amnesia caused by a head injury. Head injuries are real things that cause real amnesia states. Reincarnation not so much, so the rules can be anything you wants. :slight_smile:

Chickenpox

For the most part your description of chickenpox is spot on. It is a highly contagious viral infection with a rash characterized by itchy, blistering red spots. It does usually resolve within 2 weeks if not sooner.
A few points:
Isolation can be as simple as wearing gloves, gown, and mask and sanitizing surfaces with boiling water or bleach. It's not airborne, so they don't actually need to be isolated to the point where no one can see them. A simple face covering and barriers between your skin and the infected person's is sufficient to prevent the illness.
Itching can be prevented with mittens. This is a great idea and much better than encasing them in a blanket. That's just going to make their fever worse and dehydrate them. Speaking of which:
Hydration: Absolutely the more water the better.
Rash: Viral infections do not cause pus formation (particularly not yellow-green pus). A secondary bacterial infection of a varicella rash could cause white (barely yellow) pus to drain from the blisters but this is pretty rare. It's more likely if the patient is colonized with staph and scratching, so points for accuracy there. Bacterial infections are treated completely differently and are typically more deadly and not self-limiting (like most viral infections).
Seasonality: Viral infections have hardly anything to do with the weather. This is a common misconception, so you can keep the part where she says, "more likely to get it when it's really hot", but just know, it's not true. Extreme heat actually deactivates most viruses, including the varicella virus, which is why summertime is when you are least likely to contract chickenpox. Peak times for chickenpox are in the winter and spring when people are gathering indoors and traveling more (think Christmas, spring break, etc.). This is related to population behaviors during those months, not the weather.
Homeopathic Treatment: There is not evidence to suggest ingesting chamomile will decrease the infectious period of varicella infections. Chickenpox is self-limiting, meaning it does not require any specific treatment, however there are several herbs I suggest that may facilitate recovery. First are the standard immune boosting herbs: elderberry, vitamin C, and zinc. Second are the antiviral herbs, specifically those that have been studied in varicella: licorice and lemon balm leaf can both be made into teas and administered every few hours. Both can also be made into topical salves which can ease pain and reduce severity. Both of these herbs have good evidence surrounding their antiviral properties, including protein denaturing and mRNA replication disruption. Honey applied directly to the skin also has antiviral properties and can help sooth itching.

Overall, great job. The only things I would change are the pus (unless you really want to go the secondary bacterial route), chamomile to some other herb I mentioned, and maybe the part about hot weather increasing infectiousness (but this isn't something most people know, so eh.)

Wow- I just discovered this thread and I'm amazed by how thorough and well-thought out your responses are and that you've kept up with it for so long. Thank you for taking the time to help others improve their stories! This is an absolute blessing for us writers who don't know the first thing about anything medical-related (i.e. me lol) :smile:

I have two significant and spoilery scenes planned for my story that will cause severe injuries for some characters, so I'll avoid mentioning names/genders/context. I've done some research and consulted a nurse friend, but haven't decided exactly how I'll write them yet nor worked out a good, non-hokey balance between the realistic consequences and the life-saving magic of an ancient fantasy kingdom setting. Any advice?

One scene has a fighter break a couple ribs, a few fingers, and lose an eye when it's slashed by a blade, then spends a period recovering and learning to adjust. After those injuries, what would recovery look like and how long would it be before the character could fight/be active again? Does a slashed eye always need to be removed, leaving an empty socket? (I've seen several half-blind characters in fiction with slashed eyes that simply turn cloudy and blind and always wondered how realistic that is)

The other event has a character go into a coma for several months (edit for context: due to a head injury, is also beaten and stabbed multiple times). Considering the fact that it's so long-term and involves a developing young person, I know a full recovery and regaining their pre-coma mobility would be impossible in reality, so I intend to apply magical healing generously here. Nonetheless: What would the character's care while comatose look like? What would recovery look like?

Though magical healing is magical and the fact that my characters aren't human gives me leeway, I don't want this to negate the impact of their injuries. I'd like these scenes to have weight, impact, and consequences, with time devoted to healing and adapting to long-term/permanent effects... but also need my characters to regain enough functionality to eventually participate in the action again.

Aw!!! :heart_01: You're so sweet.

As long as the fractures to the ribs and fingers are all simple (meaning they don't puncture the skin or any internal organs) they will both heal on their own without any intervention within 6 weeks. They can definitely fight after that, no problems. You can brace the fingers, but it's not really necessary. Ribs we do literally nothing for, except advice them to not lift anything heavy and brace with a pillow if they cough or vomit. I'm gonna skip the eye injury bit for right now and circle back around later.

This and the other response are so helpful to me. Super thanks!! Thank you, thank you!!

Phew, ok, so comas don't typically happen with head injuries or being beaten or stabbed. I've talked about this before in this thread (somewhere?), but lose of consciousness is either a sign of an acute illness (infectious, liver failure, some rare autoimmune stuff) or increased intercranial pressure (ICP). Increased ICP does occur after traumatic brain injuries (TBI) if you are having a hemorrhagic stroke, i.e. a bleed inside the brain. This needs surgical intervention (usually removing a part of the skull to allow the brain to expand outside the closed box and drain placement to remove blood.) I suppose magical healing could help the body reabsorb blood faster and stop bleeding by repairing the damaged vasculature, but that would basically make the person wake up immediately. Often after surgery we will keep patient's sedated using medications while we treat other injuries or wait for ICP to go down (using a drain). Sometimes medically sedated patients can remain comatose for several days (rarely weeks) after we stop the medication, but this only really happens if we are using those medications for a long time (weeks to months). If you hear of someone "waking up" from a coma after a couple of months, this is because the physicians were giving that person sedating medication at some point. Bottom line, if a person is not on sedating medications and is 24 hours post TBI and they aren't waking up, they never will.

On the flip side, if a person is being medically sedated for months and regains consciousness, recovery for mobility is often fantastic. Hemorrhagic strokes rarely affect motor centers of the brain, more often targeting speech centers and decision making centers (frontal lobe of the brain: the part that makes you you). If the person is affected in the motor complex, physical and speech therapy in the months immediately following the brain injury can greatly improve outcomes. The brain is stupid plastic (adaptive) and injuring it is nothing like injuring the spinal cord. The reason TBI's are so scary, honestly, is because a lot of people just don't survive, don't ever "wake up", or have permanent personality changes afterwards (poor decision making skills and impulse control). Of course, lots of people have persistent weakness and balance issues that can plague them for life after a TBI, but way more fully recover motor function, particularly if they go to physical therapy religiously.