hi ^^ new comer here, just starting to write in tapas coz of my friend suggestion. English is not my first language, but i will try my best. anyway... here's my work (just 1 novel on the process atm, since i posted in tapas yesterday for the first time)
the story is about reincarnation and a runaway hero :), plz if you guys interested in fantasy theme, I would love to have some feed back.
anyway.... here goes =
Her struggles restarted in fervor as fear gripped at her heart. She tried to kick him, but he easily avoided her frantic movements. A hand closed around her neck, threatening to cut off her flow of air. "Stop. Struggling!" he growled, a promise of hurt in his tone. He smiled in satisfaction when she slumped down. His other hand went back down to her chest. With a swift tug, he ripped her armor away from her, leaving her top covered with nothing but her brassiere. Yurika let out a whimper, not even daring to let out a scream past the hand on her throat.
"Well, let's see what happens shall we?" As he spoke, he drew something out from the bag on his side. It was a crimson gem, as red as blood, glowing ominously in contrast to the blueish tint of everything else around them. Yurika found her eyes drawn to the gem. There was something about it, something that felt so...
The man hummed in satisfaction, a pleased look crossing his face when he spotted the sigil etching itself onto her chest. "My, my... it seems that my hunch was right, after all. I was right to follow this man when I'd spotted him holding onto this..." The man brought red gem up close to her face. "You should recognize this. This is the Fetu La Rossa, better known as the Crimson Star of Annihilation. You do remember all this, don't you, my... queen?"
This actually my first time writing fantasy genre, used to write romance fan fiction... anyway yoroshiku onegaishimasu senpai ^^ plz give me critique and suggestions ty so much