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Oct 2017

A title that comes to mind is Escape to Reality???

Some ideas to work around might/could be:
When Duggan and Carlos in a means to escape their pursuers come out at the end of a tunnel the world around them is stripped of life - nothing like the Bureau of Culture and Agriculture guaranteed the people of their new world they'd soon take refuge on - They're still on Earth... Not the new planet (enter planet name - I'd suggest "Vaxo" Pronounced Varo or Varos/Vaxos)

Wandering the dying world they discover a group of nomads who lead them through a barrier - inside nature is flourishing; but the nomads are being hunted down for their technology and knowledge - the Bureau actually wants destroy the world, rise a nation build on slavery and blood harvested from the people (Can change the concept there, I'm just going on various thought processes here) and with the memories Duggan has locked up in his head can bring down the corrupted Bureau for good.

I've been thinking of a comeback for a little while but nah, I've got nothing.

the mysterious world of Duggan
the Duggan effect
WAKE UP
Don't remember
remember Duggan
this is not real Duggan

The Forgotten Truth
The Forgotten Revelation
Duggan Tries To Wake Up
Duggan Isn't Real

I like these.

20 characters.

I like it but it would infringe upon Transformers copyright.

Thanks for the ideas - probably going with wiped for the title the story is roughly 80 pages and I have drawn the first 20 or so pages for the buffer the story will start next year end of January.

well.. try to be a bit creative, it's better just make "easy to remember" title by playing with rhyme or probably try popular words

here's my suggestion, i do not know what kind of story will be but i guess it will be focused on the memories, right?
- Re-Remember
- Before Blank
- Deep Inside
- Blank's Secret
- Break Amnesia

a lot of the story hinges on Duggans name. Duggan is his surname, noone ever calls him by his christian name, in the same way, Carlos visited Duggan Every month in hospital, but cant remember how long duggan has been in the coma

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  • Memory Urgency
  • The Duggan Effect
  • Mind Trigger

(too bad the internet ruined the word trigger but if you can look around it, it could work)