Here goes nothing...
Only four chapters in and the first story arc is underway. Getting close to wrap chapter 04 and hope, you enjoy my work so far 
1- Nickname: simonitropunk
2- Genre: Action/adventure and Sci-fi
3- 4 Chapters in and first story arc would end at chapter 07.
You might already be full up with replies, but just in case here is mine. And thanks for doing this! I know it takes quite a bit of time.
I'm particularly concerned about if it grabs attention in a way that doesn't feel confusing, or if I need to redo my cover because it is pretty, but may be hard to read when it's small.
Hi Sera, thank you for offering feedback kn this thread, I would like an honest review of my comic if you would be interested!
1.) Roc
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3.) The first “scene” is technically the prologue, however episodes 1-10 comprise what I would consider to be the first finished scene of Chapter 1, the first chapter is not currently complete, so I understand if you pass me over because of this, thanks for your time!
Hi Sera, thank you so much for taking your time to do this! My name is Alisa or Mallory (Mallory is the name I go by online, Alisa is the given name, either works).
This is my series:
The first act/chapter is the prologue, 7 pages in total, which are titled Prologue 1-7.
Just looked at your main comic. Crisp!
I personally don't need a review because this is all I got and I have to figure things out on my own. I'm also planning to do a new cover anyway. However to be in tune with my inner shill I'll link my comic.
But I like what @Mallory is doing.
Honest feedback is always helpful, thanks for taking the time to do this! You can just call me Luigi.
As a heads up, I don't actually do any of the art for my comic so feel free to focus more on everything else (storyboarding, dialogue, speech bubbles, general flow of the story). The colouring and bubbling also improve after chapter 5.4, so if you manage to make it that far keep that in mind!
While I don't have a completed arc for the story yet (I'd say the end of next chapter would be the end of the first "mini arc"), there are a bunch of different scenes. For now chapter 5 is probably a good stopping point as chapter 6 and 7 start a new scene. I'd personally recommend checking those out as well though (surprise, the guy who writes the story recommends you check out the story) since these latest two chapters are finally getting into the action. In total, there are 32 pages up to chapter 5 + 19 pages with chapters 6 and 7.
https://tapas.io/series/ReWritten-/info (info page for the story, the Webtoons version is the one up to date though)
Critique however you'd like, the only thing I request commentary on is any improvement you see overtime. The first few episodes were the first things I drew in over 10 years, so I'm interested in how others see the progress as I unrustify myself.
Much appreciated!
Sure, I'm always down for some constructive criticism!
Nickname: Paige
I'm still working on the first act(building to the season finale in the current chapter) but all of chapter 1 is a complete scene. There's 24 story episodes total so far, so there's a good chunk of act 1 done but just chapter 1(EP 1-5 on webtoon and EP 2-9 on tapas) is enough to get the basic gist if you don't want to read too far.
1: Your nickname - how would you like me to refer to you?
Kaydreamer or Kay are both fine!
2: Link to your comic's info page.
3: The number of episodes that covers your Act 1/First arc, or what you believe to be your first scene.
Episodes 1 through to 13! That said, it starts off a little rough, and I get a better handle on pacing issues from Episode 10 through to the current one, so if you find yourself keen to read on, you'll see a lot of improvement around there.
Thanks so much for the opportunity! No worries if you don't get to me, there's a lot of people. 
I was planning to write a better description for some time and you got me a really great idea so thank you for that. ️
Hi, thank you for taking the time to provide critique to us!
1: Your nickname - how would you like me to refer to you?
You can call me Hexigate, or just Hex.
2: Link to your comic's info page.
3: The number of episodes that covers your Act 1/First arc, or what you believe to be your first scene
Book 1, which is episodes 1-26. To be honest, the series is still in its first act (almost done), but that's a lot of reading I don't want to inundate you with. Each page is short however; much shorter than typical webtoon episodes.
If you have the spare time and energy, I would request that for critique of art, you take a brief glance at the latest pages instead of my earliest. I wouldn't find critique of my old, early art to be very useful.
Again, thank you!
1: Dave
2: Link
3: The first arc starts from episode 1 and ends at 14. Feel free to critique as harshly as you want I'm all for an honest critique.
Hi! Thank you for doing this! You can call me Wen.
If you are still making review, please take a look at my comic:
Thanks!
Hi Copper~ I'll also take a look at the most recent pages for the speech bubbles.
The Cover
The title is clear and easy to read. It's also an interesting title that can draw in people.
The composition of the cover art itself is strong and this would be great as like a paperback cover. But due to the smaller details however, it's harder to appreciate and engage with on mobile.
The Summary
Before the summary, I will say that I like you added genres and the content warnings. Important to tell that off the bat and you've already got that down.
Upon discovering his now ex-childhood friend isn't dead, an emotionally immature alcoholic tries to make amends for ruining their friendship.
This is an excellent logline for the whole story. It sets up expectations and the question for the reader. "Will our protagonist be able to make amends?"
However, if you were inclined, after this first line, you could add a small paragraph expanding some of the specific details.
E.g.: Apollo is doing fine. Just fine. He bartends, parties and drinks with his friends, and talks to a picture of his dead childhood friend. He's fine. Until he thinks he sees his friend during a night out drinking.
The story's first part
Art notes: I looked at latter pages and the bubbles are a lot more readable.
Thankfully on Tapas we can zoom in to read and I know given the traditional nature of your work, it'd be more trouble than it's worth to make the text any larger.
The pages themselves are nicely composed and while I personally love page format, with the easier legibility of a scroll on mobile, a large portion of the audience may be disinclined to read simply because it's not easy to do so on phones. I however didn't have any trouble on my phone, so it's fine. This whole topic of page vs. scroll is a mixed bag anyway.
I'm also partial to traditional color pencils and your use of color and lighting is lovely.
Story Notes:
It's a nice solid chapter one. I like how you take your time demonstrating Apollo's self destructive habits and establish his life as is as well as how he misses his friend with his talking to the photo. Great examples of showing not telling all around.
And the way the chapter ends is a great setup that delivers on your story summary.
Though the content is not my cup of tea, your delivery of storytelling is solid and clear. A slow start but I think it suits the story well. All the best seeing this through to the end ️
Thank you for the opportunity, I really hope you like it.
You may address me as VCD and I just started my comic last month and uploaded chapter 2 last week. More is still on the way.
Aight it's Sunday Night so I'll cut it off here, and try to get the rest of the reviews done tonight o9 <3
Hello Doublemelon~
@doublemelon
The cover
The animation on the gif is a nice touch! A bit wobbly though.
The title is bold and easy to read and since the story is a BL, the pose is nice too.
The Summary
Under normal circumstances, no way these two men would fall for each other. Until... intimidation and power open up the door for romance.
The summary is vague. Who are these two men? Why shouldn't they fall for each other? What exactly is it about intimidation and power that opens romance for them? Does one use intimidation to shove open that door? What happens in the beginning of the story specifically that I should look forward to?
Essentially if you tell me who the two men are, why they shouldn't fall in love and the inciting incident (what situation/action forces that door to romance open)--then it's more likely to hook a reader that does check out the summary first.
I like the cover and it'd entice me to click on your comic, but since I read the summary, I'd enter it feeling a bit iffy about the story since it doesn't actually tell me much.
The First Part
The narrative is not my cup of tea. (I love BL but not so much high school romances) But that's okay, cause that's not my focus here.
I read the first six episodes and what I'll say you do well is turning around expectations. The reader, and protagonist, does one thing expecting a certain result and it ends up being the opposite, that's good writing.
However, what I didn't really learn right away is...their names, I think. It's hard to get attached to the story if I don't even know/remember the characters names.
The text is legible in the speech bubbles, which is good. The grammar can feel a bit off at times in some turns of phrase, so I'd pay closer attention to that.
The sound effects however (and perhaps this is a pet peeve of mine), don't need to be literal actions. The drawing + motion lines is enough for actions that are like a "grab" or 'reveal!' or 'a shiny guy appears' , You can draw those things clearly and make that guy's background shiny enough for the 'show don't tell' principle to apply. Generally speaking, if it doesn't make an actual sound, it's not a sound effect.
Overall though the first six episodes does set up the story and the dynamic between the two main leads and ends with an introduction of a third. I like that the protagonist is actively trying to change his situation and dealing with consequences; you don't always see that.
