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I saw Xiz in the parking lot laughing at a confused person wondering where their car went, pressing the unlock button on their key fob and then hearing a beep coming from the roof of the library.

The poor confused man took out his phone, made a call and said “Hey Babe, you’re not gonna believe what I’m about to say but the car got on the roof of the library… I’m 100% serious … What do you mean it’s parked at home? I pressed the unlock button on the key fob and the sound came from the roof, I’ll try again.”

He pressed the button on his car keys but no sound came from anywhere around us. “I don’t hear it now but I swear to God I drove here… You’re standing in the garage and it’s there?... The keys are still on the key rack. What the heck are you talking about, you’re tripping, they’re in my h-” He looked at his hands that were holding the keys just a second ago only to see them empty. He patted all of his pockets, going so far as flipping them inside-out, looking everywhere to see if they’d fallen to the ground but to no avail. He scratched his head, questioned his own sanity, and said “You can see me standing on the lawn talking to you!?! WHAT THE F-” Suddenly he disappeared mid sentence in front of me. I looked around, then - with my heightened hearing - heard a scream coming from the suburbs.
Xiz was rolling on the ground now laughing at the man’s reaction.
I rolled my eyes as I left Xiz to his mischief.

I’m glad to hear that, but hat type of humor is her whole brand and n the novel, so I hope people like it lol

@abigaillmartin I’m genuinely glad that’s funny, was worried it was too crass :joy: I use that humor a lot throughout the novella with Lily, especially chapter 7 lol, so was hoping it was cool ^^

I realized that I posted this without even showing mine. I don't know if it is funny enough, however:

Noticing the sweat on Lux’s forehead, Tobin went ahead and lowered the A/C temperature.

“You look hot,” Tobin said.

And I guess Lux misunderstood for she flinched, her whole body turning red.

“T-t-t-thank you?” She said nervously.

I laughed as I watched Tobin’s face drop, “Oo-oh, I meant that you look hot! No! I mean your sweating and all, and it’s summer and all, and you are wearing black, and you’re red! I-I-I, sorry!”

I hope it’s cool to add another, and this one is a bit of a cheat, cause it’s a whole chapter :joy: but I really would like someone to read it and tell me if it was funny or if it was too much or even out of place. It’s basically a bonus side bit where the main character, Captain Lily, is writing what she thinks is s-m-u-t, but it just reads like a parody of bad fan-fiction (intentionally that’s the joke lol). I wanted to see how far I could push that kind of humor, since it’s Lily’s brand, and did it as experiment cause I thought it was funny, but I haven’t gotten any feedback on it, so would love any thoughts of it if anyone is willing, see if I keep or delete it. Thanks so much! :pray:

This one happens in my comic's first chapter (had to split it up into multiple eps because of how huge it is). This where one the antagonists, Tabino, tricks his boss into rallying up their entire gang to take on the protagonist who beat him up. It doesn't get paid off until the climax (part of which I just posted today) when the boss finds out said protagonist is a 10 year old, and his reaction just seals it for me. XD