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I’m glad to hear that, but hat type of humor is her whole brand and n the novel, so I hope people like it lol

@abigaillmartin I’m genuinely glad that’s funny, was worried it was too crass :joy: I use that humor a lot throughout the novella with Lily, especially chapter 7 lol, so was hoping it was cool ^^

HAHAHAHA, this is exactly how I feel about some other stuff as well. Hilarious, thanks for sharing.

I realized that I posted this without even showing mine. I don't know if it is funny enough, however:

Noticing the sweat on Lux’s forehead, Tobin went ahead and lowered the A/C temperature.

“You look hot,” Tobin said.

And I guess Lux misunderstood for she flinched, her whole body turning red.

“T-t-t-thank you?” She said nervously.

I laughed as I watched Tobin’s face drop, “Oo-oh, I meant that you look hot! No! I mean your sweating and all, and it’s summer and all, and you are wearing black, and you’re red! I-I-I, sorry!”

I hope it’s cool to add another, and this one is a bit of a cheat, cause it’s a whole chapter :joy: but I really would like someone to read it and tell me if it was funny or if it was too much or even out of place. It’s basically a bonus side bit where the main character, Captain Lily, is writing what she thinks is s-m-u-t, but it just reads like a parody of bad fan-fiction (intentionally that’s the joke lol). I wanted to see how far I could push that kind of humor, since it’s Lily’s brand, and did it as experiment cause I thought it was funny, but I haven’t gotten any feedback on it, so would love any thoughts of it if anyone is willing, see if I keep or delete it. Thanks so much! :pray:

This one happens in my comic's first chapter (had to split it up into multiple eps because of how huge it is). This where one the antagonists, Tabino, tricks his boss into rallying up their entire gang to take on the protagonist who beat him up. It doesn't get paid off until the climax (part of which I just posted today) when the boss finds out said protagonist is a 10 year old, and his reaction just seals it for me. XD