Praise Your Comics: Return of the Rue!

[DNoble]

Interstellar Hero: Nova Ranger | Tapas

Do you like power rangers? Of course you do. Everyone does.
Piper Collins becomes a ranger entirely by accident, and is thrust into the advent of a war fifty thousand years in the making, trying to work with aliens who are still debating amongst themselves over whether or not to destroy her planet of backwards uncivilized barbarians. The truth about her own planet's history, the reasons for this war, and of what may be lurking beyond the barriers of our very existence, are all the key to surviving what's to come, but those all amount to nothing next to the looming existential dread of getting to know her dad's new girlfriend.

Please feel free to give me whatever critique you'd like. This comic is designed with speed in mind, so I'm well aware the drawing is pretty sloppy in places. Even so, I'm always looking for ways to improve, both as a writer and a draftsman.

[BLTX]

Donnie The Fighting Psychopath | Tapas

In this dark comedy, 16-year-old Donnie is currently going through a downward spiral, and attempting to escape a life of unleashing Psychopathic torture on his countries twisted, and backwards people.

[TadxSarah]

A Highschool Student Named Kouji, His Yandere Neko Girlfriend Yunari And All Of Their Friends Struggling To Overcome The Trials In Their Daily Lives While Also Facing An Upcoming Supernatural War To Protect Their World.

I Love My Yandere Neko Girlfriend | Tapas

[teasidesketches]

Hey there!! It's nice to see you again, too!
I've been doing as well as I could -- struggled with a lot of IRL issues and thus fell off the face of the earth for a little while, and in the meantime did a lot of soul searching in an attempt to find a digital style that works for me that I want to use for comics (still working on that, but I think I'm finally making progress!).
I'm doing a bit better now, though, so I'm trying to get myself back into my hobbies, interests, and communities! My boyfriend has been working on developing his own comic, too, and that's gotten me interested in trying to finally get back to working on my own... it might be a while until I have anything to show for it, but baby steps!

I hope you've been doing well! How are things on your end?

[aqua03]

I'm glad to hear you're doing better. Eager to see your future work going forward.

I've actually also been doing a lot of soul searching regarding my work and my relationship with it as well coincidentally. Recently finished up an EGT comic project and now have been planning on taking a break to polish up my art skills and figure out just want I want to do with my life going forward in general, actually. Hopefully I'll figure things out soon enough.

[teasidesketches]

Hello hello, here I am with some praise for you!

• The background work is phenomenal! You put so much effort and love into each and every one of your environments, and it shows -- they greatly serve to enhance the narrative and add an immersive richness to your comic.
• I really like your character designs. They're relatively simple designs and therefore easy to draw repeatedly, but they're all unique and distinct from each other where I can pretty easily tell each character from the others without having to think about it at all. Also, they're just overall aesthetically appealing.
• I think you did a great job weaving some lore-building into your prologue and making it actually feel like part of the story, rather than just info dumping. I normally turn away from stories that begin with a history lesson, but you managed to include it in a way that enriches the story and directly impacts our understanding of Adi and her culture. I could easily understand how this information was necessary to understanding the story from the very beginning.
• I think your pacing is quite good! It doesn't feel too slow, nor does it feel rushed and like too much is happening too quickly. Happy medium!

I don't have much in the way of critique right now because I was pretty pleased with what I read (and, admittedly, my brain is in praise mode, so I'd really have to be looking extra hard for criticism -- also, there are some things I want to see develop further before I make any comments on them), so my best advice would just be to keep up the great work and strive to always improve on what you're doing! I think you're off to a great start, and I applaud your marker work because I know just how much effort it is -- I look forward to seeing how you develop further!

Also, thanks for subscribing to my comic, even if it's on a massive hiatus right now -- I really appreciate it!

[Scarlet_Cryptid]

Thank you for your kind words, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. (I certainly enjoyed the cascade of comments on the comic!!)

Secret marker nerd handshake

[teasidesketches]

Oh, I wish you the best of luck with your art journey and figuring out what you want to do with yourself! It's definitely no easy task, but I send you my well wishes that everything will fall into place for you however you decide you want to move forward.

[aqua03]

Thanks. That really means a lot to me to hears. Here's hoping I can figure it out soon enough.

[stiatent]

@teasidesketches nice to meet you n happi thanksgiving, I'm definitely in your brand new face category XD
Its my first time making webcomics, the project started as an action-horror videogame idea. The game concept now serves as the in-world rules. Tried to give the visuals a videogame appeal too.

Og Game Concept

the player was the carrier of a virus that would infect and mutate nearby lifeforms into monsters. The monsters would in turn attack the player and groups of infected (multiples of 5) would stack to create deadlier foes (similar to the Thing) and increase the game difficulty. Another condition the player experienced was the ability to control states of matter (liquid, solid, gas), something to be mastered overtime.

The comic follows two brothers Owen (12) and Evan (21) who gain unusual abilities after hearing a strange Hum one night. The downside of their condition is that anyone else who comes into close proximity, instantly mutates into horrific monsters. They unwillingly cause an outbreak. Their condition acts like a double edge sword and they must better understand their skills in order to survive. Situations occur where they try to rescue survivors while also try to avoid infecting them. They'll eventually learn that there are others who share their condition and not all of them have good intentions.

Additional details

The heart of the story is the brothers' kinship, their teamwork and growth overtime. Superpowers range from gross, surreal and creepy, and characters are a mixture of fantasy classes, superheroes and martialartists. (A little disclaimer is that the dad and big brother have an argument early in the story, its a story of forgiveness too and the father comes around much later.)

I'M ̶n̶o̶t̶ A SICK BOY! | Tapas

thanks for the opportunity

[GingerLoge]

Thank you for this opportunity, and welcome back!

in this darkened land | Tapas

My webcomic is a fantasy story about a long war between human beings and a race of monster-taming, magic-using shapeshifters. The main character is the only human being who's also a mage, but instead of take part in the war, he travels to desert regions and lives as a storyteller. The people he'll meet there will try to convince him to help them out, but he has something to hide.

I uploaded only two chapters so far, so the story has just begun, I'm sorry for that! If you're going to read it anyway and you have some critical feedback in mind, please don't hold back!

[igneriss]

Such a nice thread idea! I'd love to get some comments on my series ( : it's a fantasy story about a thief who starts working for a famous inventor after she got caught while running away from the crime scene.

6,75 | Tapas

Oh, and I checked out Ivory Weald and subbed just in case you want to come back to drawing it! (... I've recently returned to drawing mine after 3 years of hiatus ) i love the story so far, Felicity is so precious, and I wonder what's going to happen to Ragnar and hope Matthias is okay Your drawings skills are amazing, I admire the effort you must've put into colouring and all those backgrounds! Great job!

[TheDoublekey]

Ok so, first of all, here's my comic:

Age I- Age of Darkness | Tapas

Synopsis: In an age where darkness threatens humanity, a terrible accident forever changes the lives of the two brothers Frederick and Nigel. After three long years, they are met by a strange yet eccentric individual who seems to know a lot about their past. Follow the adventures of Frederick and Nigel in their quest to defeat the evil and rescue their loved ones.

Request for feedback

I wanted some honest feedback on the story, the characters and the art. Be as honest as you want, because I wish to improve as an artist and I want to use critiques to grow. Feel free to read as many episodes as you desire, you're not forced to go all through with it.
The part that concerns me the most about my comic is the beginning, in particular, the first chapter. I keep asking myself "Is it a strong start? Does it lack something? Is the pacing of the story good?" and that's why I keep thinking to myself that I want to remake the entire first half of the story.

Thanks in advance!

[arxianfall]

[dsptss78]

Thank you for this opportunity.

Dan | Tapas

Synopsis: This is the story of a boy being rejected by society and hated. However, his life takes a big turn once he realizes his hidden ability. What is Dan's ability? How did he attain them? Is Dan a hero or a villain? Who is right or who is wrong? In this society searching for answers only results in more questions.

I'm looking for an honest review of my webcomic. The good and the bad things and suggestions for improvement.

[thecrystalrook]

Sure I'm in:

Space Pirate | Tapas

Synopsis: Space Pirate takes place in the distant future in our galaxy. An evolutionary branch of humans collectively known as space pirates has shown up, and are generally known as terrorists with supernatural abilities - inhuman strength, magic etc. On the other side, an empire called Blue Sun controls the galaxy and has figured out how to use magic for their strongest soldiers despite them not being space pirates. Naturally, this has led to a socio-political mess where imperial propaganda against space pirates is used by Blue Sun to leverage more power. This story focuses on a particular space pirate who's been dragged into a conflict pitting him against Blue Sun.

Feel free to be critical. I generally know the flaws and pros/cons of the first few episodes, but I don't get as much feedback usually on what goes on after that.

[kitschensyngk]

Terry was a social pariah in his old neighborhood. He's moved to a new school and is hoping to start over, make new friends, and live a normal life. Unfortunately, when you don't even fit in at a school as socially Darwinist as Thomas Bowdler Junior High, you can't afford to be picky with the friends you make.

Nachos Con Carne | Tapas

Not much to my other one - I just took a bunch of characters I designed over the years and gave them a forum to express themselves.

Words. | Tapas

[jensrichard77]

Oh hello @teasidesketches and welcome back.

Besides the big work on the bic story of Bunneh The Rabbit I have a small one-shot comic here

The Last Cup Of Tea | Tapas

And if you have the time and want to follow the progress of Bunneh then I welcome you at our homepage

Bunneh The Rabbit

[Rocksteady_Comics]

Hi!

You might already have your hands full, but if you aren't too flooded with series, here's mine.

It's a light hearted sci-fi adventure comic about a cowardly space pilot who accidentally takes a job with a group of bounty hunters searching for a lost alien treasure. Now he's getting excitement, adventure, and new friends - whether he wants them or not!

Rocksteady Mining Co. | Tapas

I'm down for whatever critique you want to give.

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