(I took the effort to look at your most recent pages as well, to see the evolution between the beginning and the now)
Story starts of strong, you get a nice introduction to the world without rellying on an exposition dump. Good blend of comedy in the mix, gives the impression we're going to be in for a fun ride.
Artwise, I'd brush up on fundamentals, study anatomy to help prevent some of the 'wonkyness'. Backgrounds are well done, the use of traditional media gives it a nice feeling.
Your panel layouts are also nice and instantly readable, which is expecially impressive considering you work traditional!
An action adventure story set in a scifi world. It follows the journey of Kyara, Zack and their robot pal Blip thoughout a far off world, filled with dangerous machines, deadly beasts and lots of secrets to uncover.