Reviews for Long-form Comics that have posted more than 30 pages

[concepcionbrothers]

A new review is up on our website, guys! If you read Grayscale, then maybe you'd want to check out what we have to say about how it could be improved and made even better

Check out the review here

[keontan]

Thank you again for your awesome review! Really appreciate it!

[MWMarshall]

I've had this tab open for a while and kept putting off replying. Maybe too late to the party to get a review, but I'll go ahead and ask nicely anyway.

Having written many anime reviews through the years myself, I appreciate the work that goes into thought-out, constructive criticism. And I, at least, appreciate when people take the time to tell me what I'm doing wrong and what I'm doing right (if anything) to improve my own skill as a writer and make my stories more enjoyable to read. So...

1. Title
Only In Your Dreams

2. Genre
Romance (sub-genre modern fantasy)

3. Cover (if you want)

4. Brief summary
An ordinary man unsatisfied with his ordinary life unknowingly falls in love with a dream sylph, one of the creatures that secretly writes the dreams of humans. But humans and sylphs are of different worlds, and such relationships are forbidden.

5. Link (don't forget this!)
http://tapastic.com/series/dreams

6. How best to contact you (if you own the comic), so I can leave a message if I get to writing a review.
mwm@alternateworldpublishing.com

Additional bit of info: Manga style, total length 294 pages, I can supply a review copy of the entire thing if you'd like.

[concepcionbrothers]

Don't worry @MWMarshall, I'll do my best to get through the entire list

[Cielle]

If you're still doing this, I'd like to sign up!
1. Title: Reus
2. Genre: fantasy (sub-genre: comedy)
3. Cover:

here's the tapastic banner:

4. Brief summary: Strange things are happening in the city of Regaia. Mysterious attacks at night, people disappearing, and a Vigilante who--by rights--should not exist. Max is determined to get to the bottom of things--no matter who stands in her way. Unfortunately, that "who" is Rei, the peculiar boy from out-of-town who is determined to help Max, in spite of her protests. But could there be more to Rei than meets the eye?
5. Link: http://tapastic.com/series/reus
6. Best contact: Pm me through here or my tapastic profile

I think it's incredibly awesome that you're doing this!! Thanks!!

[skatuya]

Well, if you're still up to this task, I'd love to get your review of my comic. Recently hit 32 pages, and now I update twice a week. I know it's an enormous task to review comics, so I can understand if you can't do it, but I had to try. : )

1. Title
Vicious Circle
2. Genre
Supernatural (fantasy)
3. Cover

4. Brief summary
The story starts like many others: with a boy and a girl. And continues with a priest-wanna-be and almost exorcist guy, a possessed girl, a pair of information dealers (from the occult kind), a medium, some ugly looking souls, angels from any kinds and a some demonic and supernatural happenings.
5. Link
Here
6. How best to contact you (if you own the comic), so I can leave a message if I get to writing a review.
On my profile

[alakotila]

I love structured critiques! My comic is, however, 15 chapters in, so there are hundreds of pages and I understand if that is a bit much for your purposes at this moment. It's not dialogue-heavy, and should be easy to catch up on should you decide to tackle it.

NAME: Spidersilk
GENRE: Fantasy
COVER:

SUMMARY
After being held captive and tortured by an allied kingdom, Prentice, and his brother who was exiled for murdering his captors, leave their homeland. Both ex-soldiers, they are drawn to mercenary work. However, a chance meeting flings Prentice in with the city's intricate thieving underground. He joins an elite band of second-story workers masquerading as weavers. He dares to hope he has found some place where he can belong.

The thieves are secure and confident in their system. Perhaps too confident. They will be hard pressed to handle what happens next....

LINK: Spidersilk

CONTACT --- DM on twitter @ Alakotila or private message here so I can provide an email address.

[ToonDoctor]

1. Johnny Bullet
2. action, car racing, retro
3. 
   
   
4. A man and his car
5. Link (don't forget this!)
6. info@comicbookbin.com

Thank you

[ErithEl]

@concepcionbrothers

Storytelling is definitely one aspect of webcomics that needs more reviewing (so many people just focus on art) – and I am always down to get some constructive feedback on my comic!

Burning Bright is a fantasy/adventure comic about two friends transported to another world only to discover they were brought there as part of someone's twisted plan.

Best way to contact me is through Tapastic. Shoot me a PM!

[concepcionbrothers]

Don't worry @Cielle I'll get to yours soon enough

[concepcionbrothers]

Looks interesting @skatuya don't worry, I'm still planning on writing these reviews

[concepcionbrothers]

Wow! I've got my work cut out for me here, but glad to see that you've accomplished so any pages already @alakotila

[alakotila]

@concepcionbrothers I've been doing comics for over a decade but this is my first attempt at a structured, continuous story and while I have had critiques early on it has been a couple of years. It's nice to get input, so if you are able, I would appreciate it! If not, don't worry about it

[concepcionbrothers]

NEW REVIEW LIVE:
Latest review for the series Mighty Glad has been posted on our website.

[ragraphx]

Thanks again for the review concepcionbrothers, you're awesome!

Totally agree with everything you said, the comic is probably a little too young yet for a review, but thanks for reviewing it anyway, it's insanely helpful to get any kind of feedback.

Thanks again for taking the time and the "Save the Cat" part is coming.

[mjmassey]

If you can get to it, my comic Vatican Assassins has been going on for almost 4 years now. Though I'm taking a short break at the moment and returning at the end of this month.

1. Vatican Assassins

2. Action/Urban Fantasy/ Drama

3. Viola, Fife, and Xy are Blessed Children--those with divine powers of Saints. As in-training agents for the Vatican's secret militia, they fight demons, dodge the Orthodox church, and try to survive hell on Earth.

4. Link
5. Either @ mention me on here or on twitter @MelissaJMassey

[shiftingverses]

The Templars of the Shifting Verse
Fantasy ./ Drama

Four immortals are held together by history and a mysterious monolith seated inside a flying house. Their leader, Augustus Praxio, is somewhat of a messiah figure, being from a time when magic ran rampant across the globe. However, the other three found themselves uncomfortable with such a legacy, and in 1953, Augustus finds himself alone.

Link the the comic

Just message me on here if you get round to giving it a read.

[VermillionWorks]

Uh well, if this is still a go, and if you get around to it, I'm open to a review of my comic...

Title: Daniel
Genre: Horror, drama (NSFW for graphic violence)
Summary: In a 1930s Illinois, we follow the tale of Daniel Groth, a down-on-his-luck but good spirited gravedigger who simply disappears one day without a trace, leaving behind his best and only friend, Christine, of whom he was secretly in love with. He returns months later to Christine's house...very much changed. Now a horrifying creature of the night, Daniel's true personality is fading away, leaving only his unquenchable desire for blood.
LINKS: My main site is a page ahead of my Tapastic page. but you can read it through either.
Main site: http://www.vermillionworks.com/daniel
Tapastic mirror: http://tapastic.com/series/daniel

You can either contact me through Tapastic or via email -
vermillionworks (a) gmail dot com

[Marvin]

Hey ! I said I'd be back (: I'm still convinced my story needs another chapter for the reader to really get where I'm going but by the time you get to mine (if you're still doing this) there should be enough.
Anyway ! Here goes nothing :

Title : Humor Me

Genre : Slice of Life (with a bit of romance but later)

Summary : Life isn't always sunshine and daisies, scholarship student Charlie Summers knows that very well.
Since her mother passed away and her father fled his responsibilities, everyday became a trial for the high schooler.
But Charlie is determined to do everything to protect her brother, be it lying to the authorities and neighbours, imitating her father's signature, or letting everyone think she's a boy.
No matter if her schoolmates think she's a weirdo with no friends, she has only one goal in mind : reaching graduation and majority without trouble !

Link : Here you go !

Contact : You can either send me a PM on my profile or mention me in this thread !

Some precisions : This is my first story so I'm not very confident in the way I give information (I'm always afraid I'm not giving enough). Also the most important for me are my characters, I want them to be lovable and consistant so don't hesitate to point out anything that doesn't work. I'm not really afraid of clichés, my story is (or will be) full of it but as long as I make them my own, I'm ok with that.
One last thing : English isn't my mother tongue but I have someone to proof read my work and I often seek advice from some of my readers if need be. Even with all that, I'm afraid my dialogues are still a bit stiff....

A review of your reviews (feedback is nice for everyone) : I like how upfront they are, you're not sugarcoating anything and it's obvious that you've taken notes and everything while reading the comic. It's good to know what we did right and wrong so far but maybe it would be nice to emphasize what we could do next in the story to make it better and fix the previous mistakes I think... (Most of us won't be able nor willing to draw their first chapter again). Also, when you quote the comic, it would be great to insert a screencap of the panel ! (WintreKitty does it in her reviews, it makes them less clustered, more lively and the readers are happy to see some pictures :D)

Thanks again for taking the time to do this !

[Squeakybat]

I would appreciate some constructive feedback on my comic. I'd love to make it better any way I can!

1. Title
   Stellar Persona
2. Genre
   Fantasy
3. Cover (if you want)
   
4. Brief summary
   Magical space dragon gives kids powers to save the world.
5. Link (don't forget this!)
   http://stellarpersona.tumblr.com/
6. How best to contact you (if you own the comic), so I can leave a message if I get to writing a review.
   Just message me by sending me a private message.