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Im more of a writer and from a writers perspective, I like how its a gag with a faint. Establishing shot serves its job, the middle panels serve as the feint threatening the cliche of "bad luck new kid", but the gag escalates to vehiular assault leading to aprooval! The fact that most of the gag is off panel engages me, so good job on writing that sequence.

Anyway heres my dumb panel.

Its from a stream of conciousness speed comic called The Confounding Chicken-Man, #2 Tactics a.k.a Grave Nemesis.

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@toadsteroven I think I don't understand the joke >.< what do feminists have to do with this guy getting punched in the face? I might not be the target audience for this kind of humor haha. I think your expressions do a good job of conveying your character's personalities. I think reviewing some proportions tutorials would really help take your art to the next level! Here's one from Nsio, who does a tooonnn of really helpful tutorials. Keep up the good work ^.^


Here's the latest page of Reus

@Cielle I really like the expressions of the girl (and breaking the 4th wall with the bubbles comment!) I really like the use of color of the speech bubbles to differentiate the characters. My only comment is the lack of the speech tails in the first few panels. Though I understand who is talking, I am curious as to why they are present in the final panels (but not the first 3?) Good job all around smile


Issue 1, Page 7 of The Pale

Oh gosh the adventure with the horse-monster continues! I like the paneling, it works well! And the use of grays really evoke the feelings you're trying to work with, good job!!

Here's the most recent from Cosmic Fish! (it even has a little tune and e'rything)

I'm also working on another comic on the side which thank goodness it doesn't take me as long to work with so it should be up soon OTL

@AffectedMind There's no dialogue on this page so it's kinda more of showing than telling. The black and white is neatly done and the lines are clean. I also use those beams on the backgrounds specially when one of my characters realizes something all of a sudden.XD Very nice page. ^u^


Here's the latest page of U-Speed. smile

@HitoriEdo Thanks dude! Glad you like it. Yeah these were done almost 8 years ago when I first started been serious about doing comics. The art, layout and text all improve over time smile I promise LOL!!! If you want please feel free to check out my ongoing comic book series Super-Dud.