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Apr 2019

We all have the moments in our work we just CAN'T WAIT to get into. Sometimes its those moments that just oooooze out the best creativity in all of us. For me, I love writing some slapstick gags. Don't get me wrong, drawing them brings out the best challenge in my work! But writing them is a different story because sometimes you just get to go in some GREAT EXCRUCIATING DETAIL! Like this:

“Hahahahahahahahahahaha!” Gabriel laughed while his ribs began to ache. He stumbled into the shadow and continued laughing, “C’mon guys, ain’t that funny?! It makes you think Julianna is all lovey-dovey for Jaaaaaacoooooob~. Or! Or! Maybe she and Mellisa should go dressing up for the next fairytale princess pony movie! And! And… and…” Gabe patted the shadow that stood over him. A small feeling, like a sword, slowly penetrated his abdomen. His breath grew cold, and his heart pounded fast enough that it could almost pop. The poor sucker looked up as slowly as he could, and saw a pair of flaming red eyes where Julianna’s face should be. The boys tried to slowly back themselves to the front door, but to their shock, Julianna was already standing there with the door locked. The bull stood there and sharpened its horns, while its targets huddled together and shivers and tears.

But what about you? What are the best moments/scenes to write and/or draw in your stories? How far in detail do you go? Do you go in great detail? Or do you pull a Chuck Jones and do less for more? Let me know! I'm curious~ (And maybe I might check you out~.)

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I like writing the juxtaposition of two characters reacting to things in very different manners.

It shocked Claire; she damned near ran from the table. While telling Clair about Punchy knocking catnip all over the bar, Grimm went “See the aftermath,” or something like that. Then stuck his most recent attempt in her face. To say she was displeased was an understatement, though I’m not sure why. Felis aren’t monogamous. We don’t experience problems with multiple partners, especially if catnip is involved. If you entertain doubts about your partner satisfying you, have some catnip. You’ll enjoy yourself, whether he’s decent or not, and experience no problem taking on more. It’s an excuse to walk funny the next morning. I hadn’t intended on having sex that night. Thanks to Punchy being sloshed and a klutz, an orgy is what happened. I did half the town that night and I absolutely, thoroughly enjoyed it. No release quite like being repeatedly pounded all night long. Shiver. I’m going to enjoy that memory for a long time.

I enjoy writing action scenes. Especially the middle of them, the "trading blows" phase if you will. I love writing the reactions of being hit and dealing damage.
I tend to minimalize the amount of action and just focus on the cool parts. So a bit of a medium detail, that way I don't get stuck with too much or too little.

i love.............. the conflict. where ppl let eachother down and go against their morals. the true Failures

im putting writing for the next chapter of my comic on hold for college, but i have a soul crushing scene planned and im so excited

The events that make character break down or experience strong emotions. They're also ones of the most challenging ones.

I have in store a lot of those to draw in nearest chapters...

In writing I love conversation exchanges that involve people from very different backgrounds, the assumptions of similar words that mean different things, learning from each other, etc.

In drawing I love action scenes.

When it comes to writing it's often scenes to do with the personality/character of an individual. Realizing just how awful someone really was or just how selfless an individual is; the exact moment of discovery of the true motivations behind a characters specific actions. Also moments that are really raw or show a character being really vulnerable even though they may have often had a personality or persona that made them seem unshakeable.

As for drawing it's probably small intimate moments or just really casual ones like close conversations or a group of friends sharing space hanging out; and while I don't draw a lot of action I know that I'm looking forward to it. The exchange of blows and battle banter are always a personal favorite.

I love writing scenes when all the foreshadowing done in the previous chapters come together. Like, the sentence can be simple and seemingly innocent but the connotations behind it have greater meaning and kind of suggests a shift in the story.

These scenes give me such a thrill!

I LOVE foreshadowing! I love giving hints here and there, even more than writing the big revelations most of the times! Also, whenever I have a scene that is so well planned and so vivid in my head that it just comes exactly as I want it!

And let's not forget scenes with some sexual tension between characters, I'm a sucker for those! :slight_smile:

No-one-really-needs-this-level-of-wordy-detail sex scenes.

Obviously, most of this has never been read by someone :sweat_smile:

I can't wait to get to the parts where the reader will be helplessly screaming at their screen for the characters not to make a Very Bad Decision. I like readers to flip tables after my content XD

Now that I think about it...I don't think I like to write scenes at all. Tense, exciting, romantic, grandiose...I don't like any of them. They all just feel like vehicles, tools that I have to use so the reader can know what's happening.

What I do enjoy is dialogue~. When the scene is already set and I can finally just let the characters talk to each other and learn about each other. I particularly like adding depth to characters who were previously just "the jerk" or "the pretty face", especially when the main character was also biased against them, and discovers their humanity for the first time.

I really love writing character interactions of any sort ^^ I love seeing how my characters' personalities mesh or clash.

Oh, yes. Those scenes where you can clearly see that two characters are attracted to each other but no one says anything because they're too flustered and the reader can't help but ship them together! I love those scenes too!

Goofy comedy dialog, there is a disproportionate amount of this text in my books compared to any other content.

Shiva's frustration from the loss was being drowned in the rising tide of a sea of excitement. “The tournament is coming up soon. Lady Isis has won this tournament every time for the last forty cycles. I want to hear some fresh ideas about how we can beat her team this cycle.”

Virabhadra the drone raised his hand and then spoke, “Her champions won the last four hundred cycles, my lord. We can deny her a victory but not participating.”

Shiva answered, “Good logic, Virabhadra. We have a Plan B. We still need a Plan A.”

Ninja said, “We could hide in the pond outside of her dojo. We breath through reed sticks. When she least expects it, we shoot poisoned darts out of our reeds at her warriors.”

Shiva said, “I like it. That's our new Plan B. The Virabhadra's Plan B is now Plan C. What is our Plan A?”

Hobo said, “I can pee in a jar.”

Shiva said, “I think we are losing focus on the goal.”

One of the moments I live for when writing is the angst! God I love ripping my heart apart and hoping that it's doing the same to my readers.

Though I have to say that writing the angst resolution is by far the most satisfying!

It honestly depend on my mood at the time. Sometimes I want to draw a kickass action scene that challenges my ability to do choreography and scene composition, and other times I just want to slow things down and convey the feelings of my characters in a way that may subvert reader expectations. Lately I've been getting into a bit of light fanservice with one of my comics :sunglasses:

I’ve got two that I absolutely adore:

1) Scenes full of banter. Dialogue is what I write for, frankly. I love getting my characters to bandy with words!

2) Scenes that feature a character having to confront something. Often times, a low point. Those are the scenes that stand out to me as landmarks as I write - what emotional turmoil can I put this person though? What awful thing can I have them learn? What terrible moment do they have to live through? ...I’m a mean author. :slight_smile: However, those are my landmarks because plots and character arcs don’t happen without pain, and I also look forward to their redemption and/or reward.

Scenes where I get to do reveals! Especially reveals that were predicated on some foreshadowing from chapters past. For me, the most interesting part of a story is seeing all the narrative threads and hints coming together for a big revelation.