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Oct 2015

I would go with 3 as it has the space as logo number 4 yet doesn't have the large s that closes the smaller case letters. The small s could go with a bit more line thickness as the s is harder to read.

I like number 1 because it's a lot more stylized than the others. However the other ones are easier to read, so I think 3 would be the best one smile The space in 4 makes it look a little too scribbley, 3 is sort of the happy medium IMO.

23 days later

I like this! And if it's a style you're comfortable with, I say go for it! It kinda reminds me of a mix between All This Doubt and awut. Very nice! ~ <3

I'm pretty confortable with this style. I made it in a way I can draw fast, because I don't have much time.
I'm happy that you liked it smile

Hey! Since my switch from b/w to color pages, I've been trying to tweak things a bit to help tone down the digital look. So far I've got this(below). Is that better, worse, or do you guys have any other suggestions? Thanks in advance!

Current Page 5:

Slightly Tweaked Ver.

I like the slightly tweaked version better. They're both well done, but I think the second one is more interesting. It adds texture and matches the gritty western theme you seem to have going.

Thanks for the help! I thought the same thing myself, but I was also worried a bit about adding too much too it. Looks like I've got some thing new to add next chapter! ^^

I think I actually prefer the first one, the characters seem to stand out more and it looks cleaner. If you are going to use the second method I would recommend reducing the grain on your points of focus. (e.g. the walking character and the fellow with the red hat)

Very true! It's all on another layer, so I just need to lower the opacity some more and it should be good. Thanks for the help, Young Adventurer!

Hey people!! I need to know which side is better so I can include it for my next update. The one to the left is my original concept, but I don't know what would look good on Tapastic's comic page. Thank you for the help. Peace. :))

8 days later

Hey everyone. Recently started a new comic called 'The Little Story of Jean'
The art style is a HUGE change from my main series Shade2, but I won't be using that for a comparison, because I'm trying to go for something entirely different (though you can still check Shade out and give me your thoughts.)
I'll post the first 3 pages here (sorry for clogging up the thread)




Can you tell me whether the entire thing with unprecise lines and watercolour is effective? Is it satisfying to your eyes? Tell me what kind of things I could change to make the experience better.

For comparison, I'm drawing a lot of inspiration from this manga, Takemitsu Zamurai1