Hey @Cielle! I've been following you since last year sooo... TIME TO REVIEW YOUR PROGRESS SO FAR!
Art: I'm going to start here first, because its the most prominent of your progress.
When you first started with the prologue, I can see you build it up with location and lore of the fantasy world you created. But I think your art skills doesn't do your world justice at the time since well... they're pretty shoddy (WOW I feel hypocritical when I type that!)
BUT you didn't let that stop you. You applied whatever way you know and drew us futher more into it, which is for me is very much admirable! As the pages go along I noticed you experiment quite a lot things, from Panel, Colorings to the backgrounds, Character proportion and facial expression.
People will say inconsistent but I say BAH! Its the evolution of Artistic Talent! Dont be scared! Keep doing whatever you can to improve your comic, even if to change or introduce a new style to it. For people that reading this:
Not bad, eh? This is within the span of a year. Think of the potential!
Story:
Its still to early to say about the plot. I am still not familiar with the characters yet, since their past, motive hasnt been fully explained/ revealed yet. But from what I see so far, definitely interested to know! Though, I'm in love with the lore you create. Theres so much of the world/society you mention, that I feel I havent even seen 90% of it! (I know they serve sunshine chicken at the restaurant! 0o0) So I say GOOD JOB on the world building!
Whats next?... Oh!
I would say what to improve... But I'm seeing you addressed the thing as the pages go along so... lol
There are some things you could still improve: body ratio proportions, aligning the background perspective and the characters. Full body, along with buildings. Here's hoping to see your improvement in the future (once they come out of the house XD) And I KNOW you have the potential to make it better!
As mention before, you have the lore of the world fleshed out. Now all you need to do is sharpen your art!
Whoa! Thats a little bit too long! I think I blather on too much already.
tl;dr
Reus has potential on the story, and you see the improvements of the artists. Though it reads like a detective story.
(Which, is exactly what you plan Cielle? LOL) Its a little slow, (with minimal action) the majority is dialog exchange. While I love the characters talking, I want to see the TOWN! Show me how is it OUTSIDE
Well, if anybody would like to review my comic, here it is: IMAGICA=verse.
Dont be shy to speak your thoughts on it!