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Aug 2023

Descriptions can be one of the most challenging things for a writer to write. Not enough - your story is too vague, too much and your story is purple prose. I noticed a couple things recently while working on my WIPs.

  1. Description slows down a scene. If you are writing a fast paced action scene, use description sparingly. Use the description to show the action, the chase scenes, etc. But don't stop the scene to describe everything in detail. If I'm taking five minutes to read your carefully crafted descriptions, that two minute trip across the courtyard now becomes twenty in my head.

  2. Use description like seasoning. A little here and a little there. Every paragraph doesn't need sensory images or be all show. "Telling" works well too.

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In my opinion, descriptions are a great way to inform your readers how your POV character feels about what they're looking at. A classic example is when a character that the protagonist finds attractive is described in noticeably more detail than other characters, but it could be used inversely—e.g. you could zero in on the unpleasant details of an otherwise gorgeous vista to convey that the protagonist really didn't want to be dragged into this family vacation.

Other than that, I'd say it's generally a good idea to describe anything that the audience hasn't seen before in at least some amount of detail. Obviously you don't have to describe every single building your characters pass by on a stroll through town, but ideally we should have at least some idea of what the scenery looks like.

Descriptions are hard but necessary. They're a way to describe the scene and characters through a MC point of view, even in third person.