So, I’m revisiting this thread, and I suppose I’ll have another shot at criticism (though I’m not very good at it)
@tired_programmer Ok, so I’ve only read through the first chapter, but your premise is really interesting and it shows promise. I like how much thought you put into your world-building. However, the art seems kind of dead to me, the colors, especially, feel so washed out and all (though if that’s an artistic choice, I won’t complain). Anyways, your action scenes seem a li’l unenergetic and the poses aren’t dynamic when they need to be. Aside from that, there were some grammar and spelling errors and also some pretty wonky anatomy but they’re nothing too glaring, so... yeah.
@buttersphere Well, I gotta say, your comic charmed me! It may just be my taste, since I like comedies and all, but it was really adorable! Your artstyle was cute and cartoony and I really like that! Ehem. Anyways. Though it may not be as impactful since your comic is a comedy, but the fight scenes don’t have much energy. Other than that, some of the events and speech bubbles were hard to follow. Well, can’t say much else, since your comic WAS my cup of tea, so yeah.
@LCT_m_a_d I really like your art, and I think it complements your intro really well. Also, your first page makes for a really good hook that I’m excited to see where you’re gonna take this. Anyways, I suppose my only complaint is that it is difficult to differentiate the foreground from the background. There wasn’t much contrast in your color palettes so I couldn’t make out at what part the character ends and the background begins. So, yeah, that’s just about everything I can think of.
Welp, that’s about it for this visit, here’s my comic so you guys can rip it to shreds, too.