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I definitely know I have to rewrite the beginning, but I'd like to know how my writing stands now. If anything, I'd like to know if my writing has improved at all comparing the first few chapters to the last few. I've chosen to write in a present tense/ third person POV which turns off a lot of…
I definitely know I have to rewrite the beginning, but I'd like to know how my writing stands now. If anything, I'd like to know if my writing has improved at all comparing the first few chapters to the last few. I've chosen to write in a present tense/ third person POV which turns off a lot of…
Genre: (dark?) Fantasy, Reincarnation, Action, Adventure, Gods, Magic/ Supernatural. Webnovel I'm new to writing and I think I've written it like a light novel. My goal is to turn it into a manga eventually (once my drawing is better)
Well, it's definitely working. Keep it up!
Lol i can see why its jarring to some readers, but I hope this creative choice works out. I want to leave it vague for worldbuilding purposes,
Turning 25 
I've read a bit just now and it's sounds really good. Like a professional novel lol
One of my biggest walls was how do I insert internal monolouges in first person when I've been writing in third person. Hopefully, the way I "fixed" it, it will work out lol.
This is also my first novel so everything is pretty much new to me. I try to write as much as I can but I'm also working a full time job, learning to draw, and attempting to stream lol so sometime my brain isn't there.
Yes, I remember you left a comment on my story, so I thank you greatly! I agree with you. I wrote in first person initially, but I quickly hit a wall in my writing.
Lol yeah. My goal is to convert it into a manga one day and hopefully an anime
Drop your story so I can read it. I can't seem to find other stories that write in the same perspective/ tense.
Haha yeah. When I'm writing, I'm imagining everything in manga panels lol My plan is to write my story on paper first and then to a light novel and then to a manga. I'm just waiting for my drawing skills to kick in. I think that's the main reason as to why I am writing in present tense + first perso…
Yeah thanks for the heads up. I read your first episode as well and it sounds a lot more professional than mine lol After the first episode/ prologue, I switch to a close 3rd person narrative as well. Hopefully, it doesn't turn readers off too much.
Yeah I find myself trying to force the present tense, but I've read online somewhere that it's fine to switch between the two tenses if it makes sense. But then again, I'm not too sure if it makes sense when I write it lol
Yeah I see what your saying. I guess from my perspective, writing in first person and in past tense makes people feel like they are the MC and that the story has already happened. However, what I am aiming for is you are being told a story as it unfolds? If that makes sense lol
Hmm.. that was pretty insightful. Thanks a lot! I guess we all need a little reassurance now and again.
I began writing my first novel recently. I am relatively content with what I've written so far, but I always find myself questioning if I'm writing properly to begin with. I looked up online and most novels are written in first person and in past tense. Yet, my novel is in third person and presen…
I honestly don't even know if I'm writing properly since this is my first novel. I have 5 chapters out at the moment. Let me know what you think!
Leor slowly stops flailing and comes to terms with his fate. A tear forms and rolls down his cheek as he shuts his eyes. A faint smile lingers on his lips. Maybe this isn’t too bad of a way to go