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Any type of support and feedback is very much appreciated! :smiley:

Just subscribed! Good luck with your novel, so far sounds promising and I can't wait to read it :smiley:

OMG, I didn't know that was actually possible. Sometimes luck just isn't on your side :laughing:

Nice! Is she your character?

Ah, dang it! Guess it actually works huh?

This one's new :joy: I love it.

Are you asking or is this your way to tell someone? Now I'm confused.

I burst with the squirrel thing :joy:

Good! Creative and effective, it seems. :laughing:

No, it IS funny! Or perhaps I just find mean things funny? Hard to say, but I did laugh so it served its purpose.

Nice, I simply love it.

Intel processors :joy: very creative.

Good to know I caught you on my web.

Really made me laugh :joy: good job!

Nice, this is useful indeed :laughing:

Awwww I'll save this one for future emergencies.

This is very creative! Did you write it? :laughing:

OMG :joy: That's rude and I love it.

This is one of my favorites so far.

HAHAH! Good job! Saved.

Never heard this one before :joy: it's good

I'm a member of it, but strange enough people never talk. I don't know why, even after trying to make conversation:(

No prob! Also, I'll leave the link to mine here. Please, only give it a look if you are interested. If not, it's okay!

This one's my favorite so far :laughing:

So, looking good so far. I've left a few comments, hope they're useful. I'd like to answer those other questions I couldn't answer back there, right here. Do you think I should go back and forth between past and present or talk about each all at once? It's ok the back and forth, I think that'd g…

I don't mind you being blunt about your impressions. That's, actually, what I'm looking for. Any type of feedback is always welcomed! So please, +react if you can; I'll be thankful.

Hello, hon! So, reading your thread so far, your story seems interesting but a bit troublesome, which (I think) must be the reason why you need the feedback...no? Well, although I myself have troubles too and I'm more than aware that I'm not perfect nor an expert, I would really like to help you wi…

Your story sounds great! I'll be sure to check it. I'll leave mine here just in case anyone is interested.

Your cover is simply eye-catching. It's one of those types of covers that almost screams: "Hey, come read my book. You won't regret it". And I'm saying it with all honesty :smile: Good job! 10/10