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Hi, I'm Pe and I'm Currently working on my webcomic Mena And The Gargantuan island.
Hi my name is Pema and my Mena And The Gargantuan Island. It updates every Friday with two pages. I think the biggest struggle with writing for me is wanting to stick out. I'm still a small creator and thus I really wanted to stand out amongst a sea of other bigger comics. So when writing for M…
I wasn't really sure at first, but honestly the more I look at it the more I really like the second version. I definitly see what you mean about it being more legible.
Thank you for the feedback, this was a long read but it was worth it. There are definitly things that you pointed out that I can definitly improve from, especially the coloring, text, and movement. Again thank you much for taking the time to give feedback, I'll definitly will be experimenting more t…
Thanks for the response and I guess your right about it being to early to give a fair assesment. And on the second part looks can certainly be deceiving lol. Best comparison I can give it to would probably be The Promised Neverland.
Hello everyone. I just uploaded me Webcomic Mena And The Gargantuan Island. It's on both Tapas and Webtoon!! I hope you guys check it out!
Wow! This is a lot of good advice. I'm taking everything into account. Thank you very much for your feedback.
It was kinda supposed to be a bit generic because I wanted to play on those classic magical girl tropes and kinda flip it on it's head in ch1. I got a lot of inspiration from the Madoka Magica series. How the series reeled you in with cute magical girls and then it kinda gets flipped on its head…
Thank you very much. I did draw them separately. And looking at Ami now I see she her head does look a bit smaller, so I'll definitely fix that.
Thanks, this looks really cool, I'll give it a shot.
Thank you I'll definitely check that out. I think my college does but I'll have to make sure and even if it doesn't I'll still try to see if I can find a class outside of college or online.
Thank you very much, reading over and looking at the images this really helps. my art always felt a bit off and now I know why. I'll be working on getting some new character art and better poses to fix this. I started to let go of my realistic/ still life artwork, but it's obvious now that I need to…
Here's my MC Ami. Here's her character sheet, I love when people do artwork for characters, it's a really nice thing. About Ami- Ethnicity- Spanish (Puerto Rican) Age- 17yrs old In the weight dipartment, she's a bit chubby, but it's not that noticeable. Height- 5'3 Gender- Female Sexuality- Bi Q…
Okay Here I go. Love and Aliens.
I would say for my MC Ami, I wanted her to come off as smart and proper. She always wears her hair in a top bun because for her it makes her look and feel mature. I put glasses on her because one she needs them and two it really pushed the smart girl look. I also used more paler colors in her clothe…
Thanks, I never thought of that, but I definitely like the idea of adding more sci-fi in it. I'll start working on it.
Thank you very much for the critique. I'll definitely see what I can do to improve the side views of the characters. And will also be working on the word bubbles. Hopefully, I can improve both of them soon.
Thank you very much. I'll try fixing up the word bubbles a bit and work on changing the background colors. I see what you're saying now and now I realize why I felt my backgrounds were a bit off. Thanks.
Thank you very much for the critique. I'll definitely be adding more backstories and expanding on them in the story. I wanted to do it when the time was right, but I'll definitely be planning more to get the backstories in there sooner.
Subscribed and here's my comic. Please be honest and thank you for critiquing.
Here's my character design for one of my main characters Ami. Here's her main outfit and PJs. [image][image]
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I hope you're still accepting critique here's my story Teach Me, Ami. The summary of Teach me, Ami is that the story is a sci-fi, comedy, slice of life. The story centers around Ami as she tries to balance between a normal life and the misadventures she finds herself in with her adopted brother …
One concerning fact about my main villain is that it lives and manifest in people in different ways. A thing that can be felt but never seen and never really understood.
Hi, I'm not sure if anyone if critique is still being accepted, but I would love for my comic to be critiqued. I've improved a lot from my first chapter and I wanted to see if I was going on the right track and what else I needed to focus on to improve. Thank you. Here's a link and the cover art f…
Five Facts about Ami. She's an artist Stays up late Mommy Problems Daddy Problems Actually has a big amount of cousins. Like 15 of them in her age range.
Thank you for the critique. I will definitely be going back to the drawing board. He's supposed to look overweight, but I'll have to fix the proportions to make it look more like that. But I'll defiantly try adding more triangles and squares to the design and see how it looks.
That's actually a really good idea. It was supposed to look like a giant oversized trench coat, but looking at it now adding a pair of would definitely help. And I also wanted to give him a beer belly, but it seems that's gotten the opposite effect too. So I'll have to hance that body shape too.
Looks like I'm going to have to go back to the drawing board lol. Thanks for the critique.
Thanks for the thread.
Thanks for the thread. My story is a mixture of a slice of life, comedy, and a bit of sci-fi. It tells the story of Ami. A girl trying to balance between a normal life and the misadventures she finds herself in with her adopted alien brother, Koby. As the two of them try to figure out their own goal…
Thanks for the thread.