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I like yours a lot!! I’d give it a 9.2/10! [image] Here’s mine!! 🧟🧟🧟

[image] The hold she has on me…

No idea. Mix of off-brand alcohol markers and acrylic paint?? Oh and I use a lot of hot pink for undertones.

[image] This one took me forever, but I think it perfectly encapsulates one of my novel’s main character. 🥰🥰🥰

Hi guys!! I dropped my new novel about three weeks ago now and I would absolutely love you to death if you checked it out. It’s a GL sci-fi romance with a sunshinexsunshine protector dynamic that features themes of overconsumption, capitalism, climate change, and the power of corporations. I update …

[image] Azura and her ADVENTURE​:bangbang:️FORCE​:bangbang:️WATER​:bangbang:️BLASTER​:bangbang:

Hi there!!! Congrats on your new story!! I hope you find lots of success here on tapas! Here’s mine if you would like to check it out!

If I’m going to be honest here, this might be a little embarrassing but zero. I wrote it at 2 am before my math exam and published it the same night! Don’t do what I did, kiddos.

Thank you for answering! I see where you might have been assuming past vs present now! Personally, I think the use of ‘this’ puts the reader more in the moment, as that is often better when referring to events far in the past, which muddies up the meaning of the sentence and makes it difficult to d…

Thank you for the feedback! I read through my chapter, and I couldn’t find any moments where it was not in past tense. Would you mind pointing out where you noticed that so I can fix it?

So, I tried to give this the amount of effort you gave to past reviews, so enjoy! Overall, I think the writing's flow clarity-wise is pretty okay. There are a couple of instances of obvious word misplacement and excess commas, but at least for me, that isn't what is making this novel slightly diff…

New update! New cover! Go check it out if like me you are craving cinnamon rolls!!

[image] Second digital doodle ever! I absolutely cannot believe it is almost October, but it’s almost spooky season! I still haven’t planned out my Halloween costume yet, but hopefully I can get it together before it’s too late and I’m rushing at the last minute. Are you guys hyped for spooky season…

Thank you so much for the review! I’m glad you liked it! Have a wonderful day!

Just finished the Protector of Raelin! I really love your use of imagery to make the rather grim setting seem really realistic. I would absolutely love feedback on my first (to be fair, it’s my only, but saying First makes me seem like I know what I’m doing).

IT'S OFFICIALLY FALL!! Well, at least where I live. Farewell to the season of chlorine and sunblock and welcome to the season of pretty trees and sweaters! I have been in such a fall mood all week, and I am so, so excited that I can now officially celebrate. The pumpkin spice lattes, the brisk breez…

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Hmmm do you know if you have a fan favorite side character? If you do, it might be super cool to make your comedic episode from their perspective. Similarly, this might sound super weird, but you could try to implement very popular jokes into your comic but change them to be relevant to the setting …

Do I hate any of my characters? Well, that's a difficult question. I of course hate the supposed villains in my novel, as I created them to be super hateable. But strangely enough, there's this one character that a lot of my readers seem to adore that I just... don't like. Honestly, she was meant…

[image][image][image] Sketch of the Day for the past couple of days! I’m trying to get better at drawing every day, but of course, the start of school gets in the way, so enjoy these not so great in school doodles.

Here's mine! It is a fantasy drama with lots of nephilim and waffles. Hope you get some rest and enjoy! <333 Would love any support from anyone here. I'll look at yours too!!

Honestly, probably yes. I would binge-read this. Not sure if this would be weekly-update-worthy, as I get a feeling this story is better binged. It’s a little vague and I was a bit confused, but this isn't a style critique. Your story sounds like a nerdy fantasy, and I’m a sucker for those. [:hohoho…

Okay, let's do this! Does this story sell the plot? Mostly yes. I was a bit confused during the fire part, but I think the story conveys the plot well. Does it make me want to know more? To be honest, not really. I don't really like any of the characters that much so far, but maybe that wil…

The one where I try and fail to draw bubbles but at least the eyes look good [:smug_01:] [image]

[image][image][image] Sketch a day for the past 3 days. I kinda forgot what order they were in but one of them was my first and only attempt at some instagram trend I saw with my friends cat. may color later but for now it just looks weird.

If I was writing a story about the Romans and I knew next to nothing about the Romans, I would do A LOT of research. Personally, I’d probably start by outlining what I need to know first in order to write the story, and then I would google those topics and read basic encyclopedia entries on them. Af…

Just a lil doodle I did during lunch today, but it’s giving mojo dojo casa house (ignore the coloring sheet lines). [image]

Super cool. I still have a couple questions, but I sent you a dm!

This sounds cool! Do you have the character designs ready?