yamithatkid
YamiThatKid
Sorcia, Valancia.
Euh, It's kind of awkard, I actually don't know what I should write here.
Then. Good Morning ? Or night ?
Should I present myself ?
Should I say that I write stories ?
Please have the kindness to tell me what to do...
- Joined
- Mar 18, '21
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- Mar 24, '21
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Hi ! I read through your story until the 4th episode, even if horror is not my thing. So, your character introduction is good enough, and I can understand the basic plot of it. But, you have to keep one unique font style, the change of font is very disturbing between the 2nd and 3rd episode. Also, t…
Hi, I read your first 3 part. Dude, I'm impressed ! The world building may be a little too fast for me, but else, the writing is good ! But the protagonist, Thomas Talon is a little too smart and mature for an 8 years old child, he litteraly said Fuck, is it because he is of the Talon familly or som…
I see, I thought that something was missing, but I didn't knew what. Thanks to your honest review, I finally see what was the problem ! I am grateful to you ! I will take those words at heart.
Good morning, or night ? Recently I've just started to write my first novel and honestly, I am asking myself if the chapiters that I make are not too long, or too boring to read. As I am, without a doubt, lacking in experiance and skills. I would like to ask of you to give a look at my first epi…
Oh boy. I wonder when I will finish my story tho. But, I do not think that I would make a season two for it. Maybe another story, but in relation with the old one ?
A world map as a reminder of my objective. And a clock as a reminder of the time who goes too fast of our days. With that add some drawings of your own. Plus a piano, which you do not have too much time to play at. And it gives you, my office !
Oh ! My turn ! The name is YamiThatkid, I just started to write a series of short stories of around 3 000 words per chapiter called S.T.O.R.I.E.S. Here I take all of the old legends, folklorik tales there is, and make stories of them, sometimes funny, other times a lot more darker. But what I can …
I mean, I have to get in the mood for the chapiters that I am writting.
Then, I will use of your kindness, hoping that you may be intrested in my novel. A follow for a follow as well !
Here ! I just started a couple month ago. I would not mind a third party's view on my episodes.
It's my first attempt of making a series of short stories as a novel. If you ask me why I do this. It's because I think it's cool to write stories. And mostly because I want to let my imagination run wild. By the way, I upload every 3 or 4 days for around 2000 words. I guess I will let all of you…