yamithatkid

YamiThatKid

Sorcia, Valancia.

Euh, It's kind of awkard, I actually don't know what I should write here.
Then. Good Morning ? Or night ?
Should I present myself ?
Should I say that I write stories ?
Please have the kindness to tell me what to do...

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I'm going to subscribe to it because I like the idea of the story, and I'm sure you'll improve over time. Nobody is a perfect writer and nobody starts out good.

I'd also like feedback, thank you very much. I will check out yours as well

hello, i'm not really a profesionnel but i would love to help ! i meen all i do is read so i gotta have some kind of experience hh this is my story if you can give any feedback as well https://tapas.io/series/The-house--welcome-home

I attempted to read your first episode. It's a bit bland. Also out in the beginning you have a sentence that reads funny and you should probably add a verb to it. "why the hell the people from the surface are all stubborn like that?" I have a hard time keeping track of who is speaking and when speak…

Thanks for your support, just subscribed back !

Not a subscriber milestone but I had to mention this. Probably one of my biggest milestones ever. My thread has reached 2.2k replies. This is just insane. Thank you guys so much who replies to this thread. it has been crazy that so many of you guys reply to it and hopefully, you guys manage to find …