Here, it's been raining very heavy
If you find time to read my fantasy novel, Daystar, please do. Hope you enjoy it.
Stay safe!
This should help tickle you funny bone
Here are my comics, hope you like them.
Name: Gamers Guff
Genre: Comedy
Summary: Meet Dave and Ryan, two brothers who are as polar opposite as you can imagine. But the one thing they both have in common, they both love video games. However, in their case, they don't just play the games, they literally go inside the games themselves. This results in a variety adventures(or misadventures) with these guys. Enter the marvellous and insane worlds of Gamers Guff!!!
Why should you read it?
It's simply good for a laugh
Best Example
https://tapas.io/episode/1775200
Name: Online Hassle
Genre: Comedy
Summary: Welcome to the city of Newsfeed, a world populated with citizens who all resemble various mobile phones. They are all tasked with the most tedious and menial job you can imagine.
Why should you read it?
It's simply good for a laugh
Best Examples
https://tapas.io/episode/1839596
Thank you 
I've spent a lot of time working on the magic system and the way it interacts with the culture of the world. There are definitely explanations coming In Chapter 0 I wanted to spend more time showing some of those things more than leading with big expository conversations that characters that already understand the mechanics wouldn't really have. "In this world..." "we both know that..." etc lol A short explanation for you because you were so kind The gloves are called Gauntlets and work effectively similar to a Macro you might set on a keyboard for a game. Basically there are a limited amount of slot that can be set to be cast quickly. The little cylinder is called a Spellbook. This has the longer and more complete list of spells they would have access to. But try scrolling through that to find the right spell when you're in a situation or running. The spheres that get mentioned are topographical circles that surround the sources of Mana. As you get further from sources the magic gets weaker and at certain points you lose access to certain types of magic altogether.
You know, you aren't the first one to think that dino monster is cute lol Might have to show more of that creature in the future 
People tended to like it.
Well, here goes nothing! ~
Megachurch is a horror novel about an inspector who stumbled upon the enigmatic journal of Justin Harper Lee, a young man who committed suicide on unknown reasons. Now, the inspector has jumped into a dark rabbit hole that lands him into a downward spiral filled with cultists, death, bondage, and authoritarianism.
It's skehri, ir's mystery, and it's gay! Hella gay!
My ongoing webcomic is something that grew with me. I started It when I was a kid, around 12 or 13 years old. Now, being with 24, dealing with depression, anxiety and others mental healthy issues for more than a decade, I try to show people how that life is through my boys. The struggles, confusion, misunderstandings etc that a lot of people go through and may not know how to show or express. I want to make you all valid, listened to, understood, things that not everybody had in their life. I know I hadn’t.
That’s the story of a group of teens that grew up together although it took them 15 years to start knowing each other. We’ll see how does mental health affects the lives of those kids. What do they hide behind their facades?
Saudade is a Boys Love comic.
Thank you so much for taking time out of your busy schedule to review my work! Of course I will subscribe to your novel.
Chapter 1: I think you meant past tense instead of present tense? Yeah, I really like present tense, but past tense is much more popular, so I tend to make mistakes when I convert it. Thanks for pointing those out.
Chapter 2: I'm glad you feel that way. I want my readers to immerse themselves in the world and story, so I try to keep an eye on the characters' surroundings.
Chapter 3: It will indeed come into play later. Soon, actually.
My wrist is doing fine now. Thanks for your concern.
Thank you so much for your thoughts and comments! I'm glad that you find both my art and my writing to be engaging!
I do go into more details of Ira and her insomnia as well as her struggles as a child in later chapters, however once this story is complete as a manuscript, I do want to go back and edit it. I plan on collecting these different comments and critics to use to help improve aspects of the story :D.
Thank you so much fren!!
I am new to creating both original comics and in a scrolling format, would help a ton if I can get some honest feedback My story is titled McBritain
If you like Scrolling format:
If you like reading in traditional layout:
https://tapas.io/series/McBritain-Manga-Layout1
I've just added a new opening scene and would love to get feedback. I can't wait to check out your novel, I've just looked at the info page and it sounds really interesting.
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As a child, Dexter was secretly taught magic. His Gran sharing her ability to see ghosts. When he became a librarian, he was prepared to ignore the allure of the magic world. Until he moved back to his haunted childhood town and learnt that old habits die hard. After an almost deadly encounter, he is forced into the local magical community. Unable to get one ghost out of his head Dexter is drawn to solving her murder with journals of the detective initially tasked with solving the case.
Thank you! I made some changes like you suggested. How's this for the kid's description? 
There weren't a lot of people —only himself and a family with a young child who looked like Cartman’s twin from the South Park TV show.
And the trip takes one hour! I put that in as well. I swear I did, but I think I mentally put it in my memory rather than writing it down! :o
I think it really helps that BL is popular on Tapas? I was worried because it isn't for pleasure only like a lot of the premium comics. Of course I'll have some steamy stuff, but there will be a plot
Personally, I think the cover helps a ton. It's the first thing people see and we all secretly judge a book for it's cover.
https://tapas.io/series/Terres4
Really want the feedback!
