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Sep 2022

I've been feeling like I'm in a art low lately, so maybe I could use some constructive criticism. In general I think receiving and giving feedback might help me grow at the moment, so I'm going to give it a shot (I deal better with constructive critics over unsollicited critics anyways)

I'll start! I'll leave some drawing here I did recently so it is accurate to my current skill. If you drop yours I'll do my best to point out things I notice from my level of art and experience. I'll try not to look at art styles too much because some stuff is just stylized and instead will try to approach it differently

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You're definitely going through a lot of development right now, and I can see you're in a sort of "in between" stage where you're learning new things about anatomical drawing, but still trying to feel out how to integrate them into your style, or whether to change your style to be a bit more detailed and with more naturalistic proportions.

The hands are nicely drawn, but a little too big in both images (a good easy guideline is "one hand can cover half the person's face"), and a bit over-detailed for the rest of the image on the second one, and I can see you're really starting to think about volume now in how you're drawing anatomy, but because you have the idea of drawing with volumes down, and you're adding more detail, it's making areas where you don't quite nail it feel a bit awkward. The pelvis is a really common area to struggle with around this level, because it's an area with tricky topography and looking up reference and doing practice feels really awkward and pervy! :sweat_02:

Here are some tutorials and reference bits about legs. Getting your head around the shape of the legs and pelvis, particularly the topography of the space between the legs and how fabric interacts with it should really give you a boost.


Thank you for the feedback! Funnily enough I'm always afraid my hands are too small so I end up making them bigger.
I think the pelvis is a good starting point for me, because I usually wing it haha. I have been focusing on the back and its muscles a bit for the last month so maybe I should shift the focus for a change

I am going on a three day trip this week without my tablet and laptop so maybe I can dedicate the evening hours to some practice

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