I love the art! The foundational stuff looks really great, I would maybe recommend adding grayscale or hatching to add some dimension, especially since the comic is in black and white (or at least the beginning was, I see that you add color in some chapters). At the very least, it's important to use values to your advantage but tbh your art is in a great spot already
While slice-of-life episodes are fine for some people, there has to be at least some sort of introduction to hook people onto WHY they should care about your characters. Granted, I only read the first few chapters before hopping around but I felt there was too much context missing and not a lot of grounding aspects to grasp readers into a convo. Also, the conversations feel a little stilted? Maybe it's because its a slice of life but I don't get the sense of depth with these characters (most likely because they have established relationships and can speak in a certain way with each other)
I will say, I've been giving these critiques with the idea of having a cohesive comic in mind, but as I'm hopping around and looking at things, Verledis really reads more as an art book than a comic. This isn't a bad thing btw!! I think it's just important to remember that tapas is a mainly a comic and novel site, so people will come here for some sort of story to follow. This aspect will probably help settle your feelings about the view to like/comment ratio. Maybe you'll have more engagement with your other main project esp since your art is strong and I'm assuming you have a story/plot for readers to latch onto.
Please take my words with a grain of salt, I'm by no means a professional and I'm actually slacking off at work rn so I couldn't be super thorough but please feel to reach out with any specific questions or anything if you'd like me to look at specific things!
