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Mar 28

Please, review my novel, Sapta Astra I

Journey of Isavaka from a worthless underdog to the saviour of the world with the hope of annihilating the demon army and the arising negative powers

@Aeneas1

I read the entire first episode of Nixvir, and here's what I thought:

It's apparently a fantasy series taking place in a world of sentient snowmen who have like a Medieval England-ish kind of social structure (complete with Medeival English), which is a fascinating concept. You seem to have put a lot of thought and effort into your lore, and I like that a lot.

I'm not gonna lie, though, I did have some trouble following along with the overall plot since there was so much going on, but your story seems to be leading somewhere interesting. There are sentient snowmen, mystical creatures, The Multiverse, and a ton of other things as well. And I even noticed you made a diagram detailing the social structure of one of the civilizations in your world at the end of your first episode.

I may not have comprehended all of it, but you obviously have put a lot of effort into this, and that's great. Keep going, dude.

@BoomerZ

So, I read the first chapter of Little Ball of Hate. It's apparently about a guy who gets bonded to a succubus after a one-night stand, leading to some awkward scenarios down the line.

Gotta say that this concept is interesting in the sense that it opens doors to many more wacky scenarios down the line. Will they battle other demonic creatures together? Will they form an unlikely romance? Will one of them WILLINGLY choose to stay bonded to the other at some point? So many possibilities!

Also, the artwork looks nice. It's like a cross between anime and Western influences. The main character looks pretty wacky with het overuse of eyeliner, and she has a very punk-rock aura coming from her (which I like).

The comic is also done in a manner that it's not immediately obvious what the comic is about, and the reader isn't bogged down with exposition or anything like that.

Good work, dude. Keep it up and keep creating!

4 months later
1 month later

Sorry I was away for so long. I'll get back to these soon.

Before He Kills Me
{Before he kills her, he'll love her…}

Genre_ ROMANCE THRILLER

Supermodel Meesha Dasilva awaits the return of a handsome, cold-hearted Lycan she had fallen madly in love with. Dating and love had become meaningless to her, as she waited patiently for him.

He finally returned in an unexpected visit, but with a sole mission. His mission: Kill Meesha before the night of the full moon.

Having already gained her trust, all that was left was to carry out the deed.

However, he found himself falling deeply in love with her, forgetting his mission and unable to bring himself to kill her.

Now, his mission has changed: Kill anyone who tries to hurt Meesha.

"Please, forgive me. Please. I shouldn't have hurt Meesha, I should have known better than to cross your path." The leader begged, his voice trembling with fear.

"Don't you know the saying? 'A snake that dares to strike a lion's cub must be prepared to face the lion's wrath," he said, his voice dripping with venom.

Despite his protectiveness towards Meesha, there's still one thing he can't ignore. Even if he doesn't want to kill her, on the night of the full moon, his instincts will definitely take over, and he'll be driven by a singular desire: to kill Meesha.

Will their love survive the full moon, or will his instincts tear them apart?

https://tapas.Io/series/Before-He-Kills-Me-Before-he-kills-her-hell-love-her

I'll be happy if anyone can do a review of my novel. I'm happy to hear any constructive criticism. You can also link your work, and I'll review it.