hi! I dont know if i consider myself a newbie but I have been posting on tapas for less than a year so ill leave the link to my webcomic, i´d love to know what you think! any feedback would be great! thanks in advance!
https://tapas.io/series/Separate-crossed-roads1
@MegaRay Hi, I read your comic and I have subbed to it cuz I don't know why it only has 29 subs, when it is just so good! The composition, foreshortening, and landscapes are excellent, and I love the way you have used textures. I also like how you combine realism with cartooning. Also the dragons and fantasy creatures are awesome! Your story has good pacing and I really like Lars. Keep it up
@Fedriz_Marini I love how your art looks like it's from a game, and I agree with everyone else that the mom is lovely and the relationship between parent and son is realistic, it kind of reminds me of "The Princess Bride" family aspect. You have good coloring and shading and I think you will go far with your work.
@alextsarace I like your art style. It's very 1960s-1970s underground cartooning with the thick lines. A lot of people prefer detailed art, but I still think being detailed is not necessary to convey a good story, and simplicity is more important. You have shown a great knowledge of color, and line. Your characters also have good dialogue and sometimes it feels like you are there in the room with them. The only thing I would suggest working on is the text size because sometimes the text was too small and I had trouble reading it. Keep all text the same size and spacing, and don't fit in too many lines. Split up your sentences. If you have more you would like to write, just add a second or third speech bubble instead, but don't add too much text on a page. People prefer images over text, and omit unnecessary words when needed.
I will review more comics next week. Happy Friday everyone, and good luck!
@TheDoublekey Hi I read your comic. Very suspenseful beginning. I really like the mysteriousness of it. You have a very interesting art style as well. So many people have an issue with sketchy lines, but you pull it off majestically where the scratchy lines give a layer of darkness to the story. It also adds a texture to the characters. I also like the way you play around with shading and different styles of shading. This makes everything stand out.
My only suggestions are to show and not tell. I think you have learned a lot from your mistakes, and it works better if you show a character's actions and thoughts instead of talking about them. This will bring up the suspense by a lot. Also, get rid of unnecessary words/lines you don't need and make everything matter. If there is a line that is sticking out and not doing much, erase it. If you have an adjective next to another adjective and both of them technically mean the same thing, get rid of one and keep the other. You are a god and this is your world. Everything you make has meaning. Hope this helps and good luck!
@Stargazer31
I read your comic. I really like how the story is based off of Norse mythology. It's very funny and the art style is cute. I did not expect that twist at the beginning, which means your storytelling is very complex. The only thing I would suggest is using a straightedge when drawing your panels as I feel like the wobbly lines are distracting. You can use a template, or you can use the "draw a box" tool. That is the only advice, otherwise everything else is already great so keep doing it.
@cosmicnano11
Good start to your comic so far. Nine's room is unusually clean for a gamer and that is something I find ironic. You use interesting vocabulary, and I love the way you draw. Your shading and foreshortening are excellent and complex. As for backgrounds they aren't bad. You spend a lot of time on the face and body so there really isn't a need to draw backgrounds, unless you're going to put your characters in a landscape or fight scene. It looks good so far. Even though your art is cartoony, the proportions are accurate and the art engages the reader. Nice job and keep up the good work
Yeah uh just created this a few weeks ago. The cover work kinda sucks, working on that. But uh hows the mini storys? https://tapas.io/series/Behind-You-Mini-Stories/info1
(all credit for the idea goes to Brian Coldrick)
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