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Feb 2018

Hello everyone! i don't normally start conversations on here, but I've been noticing more and more that people are able to get more feedback on their work by simply asking for it, so i figured.... WELL.... WHY NOT!!!
:laughing:
Its going to be the third anniversary in March for my comic I create with my sister!
called, Maximum Chaos18
I guess its cause I'm normally too shy to ask :blush: , but i want to get better with my comic... its everything to me and I want to show how serious I am about it. I want my readers to see the journey and improvement of my story, drawing and my writing skills.
i normally don't really get any, it makes me think that I'm not growing as an artist/creator or its not engaging enough... its kind of still in the beginning stage. (but hey I've seen pilots get some critiques.)

(please I ask be constructive not negative and hateful, they're other forums for that kind of behavior :worried: )

Maximum Chaos18

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Your style is superb and fun. The lineart is fantastic and really neat. I subbed yesterday.

One thing I would suggest is to experiment with lineweights and thick to thins to help round out forms with all black or all white backgrounds. The shading helps with the shadows but sometimes areas can come out a bit flat.

All n all. Fantastic work! Keep it up!

Your style is great, I like it! Keep it up!
I can't read all of your comic right now, so there isn't much to say beside this:

oh yes, i did see you thank you so much for the support and your comments! :heart:
yeah, i think i still need some work on telling the characters from the backgrounds, along with more stand out details.
Also in a way working in black and white in general :sweat_smile:
I normally color everything and at time used grey, but its really for skin tone not really the background.
Thank you so very much for the comment!!! :bow:
i will work more on my line weight!

thank you for the comment! :blush:
i get what your saying about webcomic format and I've never really new about that!
:astonished: :scream:
This opens up more ideas for sure, i do have to say that since i draw everything out I'll have to format my paper like that was as well.
I'll definitely take this into consideration, thank you so much again!!! :bow: