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Mar 7

Thanks for the heads up.
I've changed the gallery to a different type that might work better

1) fight is OK. Of course that's the introduction to show the abilities of our heroes. Final boss will be longer I know...

2) dialog is humorous. Sets up for action comedy but I know there's episodes of seriousness. Fighting is serious. People get hurt. If I was a first aid manufacturer, I wannabe isekaid to a shonen anime so I rake the profits :laughing:

3) personal bias, some panels are small but I'm a phone scroller comic so don't go by me.

Thank you for the feedback. I’ll work hard to avoid repeating the same mistakes. I appreciate your support and encouragement as I improve. Please keep cheering me on—it means a lot

THANK YOU..........