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Hi everyone! I'm a newbie webcomic creator and had decided to post my webcomic in Tapas too. If you like supernatural / fantasy / romance genre, feel free to check it out via the link below. Appreciate all the likes, shares, follow, and subs!

I am also looking for constructive feedback to continuously improve the comic; please feel free to comment in this forum!

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Hey and welcome to to Tapas. :grin:

I just wanted to ask, is there any specific feedback that you're looking for eg. plot, character, art style etc.

Edit:
I'm just going to add my general feedback here since I read through the first five chapters and don't want to spam the forum. (I'm not an artist so won't be able to give you critique on your art).

So the story looks quite interesting. You have me asking questions about the bakery and why Fox does what she does. I can't say much about the characters as it's to early in the story.

One thing I would look at is grammar. There seems to be a few mistakes. Also, I'd recommend working on your blurb a little. It was a bit confusing.

Anyway, I hope this helps :slight_smile:

After reading the first 3 episodes, here are my thoughts:

  1. This seems more a slide show than a comic. It starts with laying out the idea of the bakery. It says what the bakery is, but doesn't show. It would have been way better to work that into the plot of the first couple episodes to involve the reader. It's just seems like an info dumb.
  2. The art is good but used way too sparingly for a comic. Show more
  3. The dialogue balloons, which are colored, just seem to float between panels. I really have no idea who's talking.
  4. Finally, and this is the most harsh critique, the bakery is a setting. It's not a story. I don't know why I should read this. It is like you came up with a idea for a setting but you don't have a story to happen at that setting. It looks like you put a lot of time into it. You just need a hook for people to keep wanting to read it.
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