ok just read the whole thing and I'll break this into 4 parts:
art= untouchable, impeccable and I'm damn jelly about it XD almost nothing is imperfect in this respect and you should feel great about that
story= kind of cliche with the must catch secret people from my dark brooding past and all that, but the introduction of the MC as a beaver gives it a comedic touch that I appreciate and it makes it kind of fresh in a comedic way, also if it's executed well then nobody cares about cliches
characters= for now the only thing I have is that the beaver is hilarious with how serious he acts and how cliche his serious lines are, I can't take him seriously but I'm guessing that's the point, I could not stop a smile coming to my face when he took out his gun and in his apartment
nitpicking= the quote from the start.... it made me groan cause it's like in the starter kit for all edgy dark stories, it's just my own bias but I seriously rolled my eyes, also the I don't need a partner is a cliche that was very immersion breaking since it's been done in a million other cop/detective dramas to the point that now it's a parody of a parody
other than that,which is mostly just my personal bias with a dash of nitpicking, the comic is great and very enjoyable, I would recommend to read it and I'm hopeful to see it grow
also I would love your take on my comic Kao