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Sep 2022

I like this! What I would do is bring the hand over the letters, and make them a bit smaller to give them some space from the sides. Well done!

A serif font will look better with this kind of illustrations. You can also consider braking up the words, making one bigger and the other smaller with more spacing between the letters.

I like the Twenty Names cover, I don't think I would change something (except maybe the shadow effect).

I would give the Turn it Up cover a bit more depth by bringing the characters closer to the edges, and making the middle one even bigger.

Cool stuff!

ooooh, i see. that totally looks way cooler! I'm gonna try something like that! Thank you so much! :heart:

I was thinking something more like this

The title looks good big, but not so close to the edges.

Thanks so much for doing this! This has been my cover for about a year now, and some things I'm already aware of are the resolution isn't as great as I'd like, and the anatomy could use some work. The story is about a 30-something woman who is trying to run an independent grim reaper business (The Sapphire Bay Reaper Company) in a bad economy with limited funding. Meanwhile, her worst employee (gold hair) finds, and tries to help a lost girl (brown hair) who appears dead but insists otherwise.

Your art and compositions look cool! But your logo is lost in the mayhem :slight_smile: You could consider making it bigger, even if that means it will occupy the top forth of your page.

Cool design! I would make things a little more prominent like so.

Don't be afraid to take things a bit off the edges, most of the times you will get a much more dynamic outcome!

Keep up the good work!

I like the addition of the word The, but the word Paw is crushed under the paw! You could also try something like this