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I would just tell that guy to assume that all kids nowadays are natural born hackers. lol
I like your panel transition and the layout of your paneling! The comic is easy to follow smile


Here's the latest of Strike Pup:

hi! @atlas, i like the varying line weights on your figures and their expressions are nicely done. maybe try not to crop the panels so close so that the tops of their heads are cut off; it's a little bit distracting.

and here's mine, black prism1:

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Are they having a death stare moment with lightning striking in panel 1?

New Juvies for this week

Please like, share and subscribe... It does get better I promise LOL.

Wonderful coloring! I have no idea what's happening, but I can sense a certain intensity in the moment. There's even a feeling of claustrophobia with so many close ups, makes me feel like I wanna step back.


Here's the latest of SweetGum:

@atlas Check it out, this is such a cool way to work the visual format of comics -- it's very storybook method but the panels and framing are totally traditional. The linework is quite stylish here, too. The very last panel with the texturing? Ace work. Plus all of the characters' expressions are a blast to look at (that gorilla, he's killin' me!).

There's No Such Thing as Jason -- I.T. updated today, hoho. Had a blast with the lighting (car interiors, are they that moody??)!

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Oh yay, I've been wanting to get one of your pages for a while now! First off, I absolutely love your style! You probably get that a lot, but how can people not love something so unique and memorable? I've actually been meaning to read your comic for a while too and promise it's still on my to-do list. :'D ANYWAY, as for the actual page, it looks great as I expect of you. Your characters are so fun to look at that it's hard for me to not enjoy every page I see pop up on here.

And as for City of Blank, this page I've got a very angry dog:

Great color as always, Riko - I also love the breakout onomatopoeia. Nice touch.

This one took for eeeeeeever. I've never drawn so many panels on a page before!
It took me literally the whole day to get it done - but I do like it. You'll have to zoom in on it though; I could barely cram all the text I wanted into the 940px that Tapastic limits us to.

250% zoom ought to do it. Ctrl and Plus/Minus zooms in and out on Chrome and Firefox I believe.

I really enjoy the style and how clean the black grey and white is with this comic. However the walls of text is a bit hard to look past and something that easily dissuades people from reading. I know I myself have had problems with putting too much text on a page and it's a difficult thing to work around but it's definitely worth it. Try spreading the text across more panels. One of the ways I worked around it was limiting how many sentences I out in a word bubble.


This is the newest page of Discount Religion It has some bad language in it so beware.

@azureXtwilight Wow! Action packed scene! I really like the movement you have in your panels-- the blur is very effective. I wonder who the guy with the knife is-- AND-- who was his intended victim? Very cool wink


The Pale 1.19

@atlas Thank you! I wanted to show the scene how the dog's seeing it. I have no idea how it actually is, that's how dogs see scenes that they can't resist helping, in my imagination smile. Also I wanted to give this scene a certain amount of tension.
P.S.: The artwork of your comic looks great!

@agentfink -- I'm very excited about The Pale, first off. Out of the recent crop of new comics that we're both a part of, you're one of the ones that everyone should be watching.

The newest page? Great writing and dialogue. And the art style continues to be striking and effective, even in the less sweeping and more conversational panels. If your goal was to draw and write something that feels like an ominous amalgam of The Walking Dead and True Detective, then you've nailed it. If you didn't have those two franchises in mind as inspiration ... well, you still nailed it.

And now, for the newest page of Atonement1! This page was particularly challenging for us as we continue to try to establish a unique style for the comic.

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I love your gaming references.
You are able to put in so much text! I don't know how I manage but I can only put a few words per bubble. I guess you didn't draw captain falcon in is second panel... I'd love to see on of you attempts on that!

Here's the latest page of Shades Of Men!

Well my most recent page is just concluding a out of control chase scene with the main protagonist getting the jump on no good robbers, Marc meets Captain Howard the captain of the Famousland Police Department. They keep bumping heads, but Howard successfully captures the criminals and and Famousland can have a peaceful night....... or do they...?

Lastest chapter here: http://tapastic.com/series/Maximum-Chaos1